The night before my friend died

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

in 2005 my friend passed away and i wrote this the day after the funeral... R.I.P Victoria

The night before my friend died a visitor came to sight, adroiit as ever he show his face.

the night before my friend died, that visitor gave me a message to put into place

the night before my died, chills went down my spine

the night before my friend, death wondered around my mine

the night before my friend died, I thought about her one last time

the night before my friend died , my visions turn bloody at the thought of her crying

the night before me firend died, she was in so much pain

the night before my friend died, down came the rain

the night after my friend died I wasnt there

the night after my friend diied , I tried not to care

the night after my friend died , i was shocked out of fears

the night after my friend died , I brust into tears

the  night after my friend died , I was besieged and off came my face

the night  after my friend died I tried to take her place.

 


Submitted: August 07, 2012

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Saumy

very emotional poem
nicely written

Tue, August 7th, 2012 7:16am

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thx

Tue, September 25th, 2012 10:39am

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