Morning Flowers

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

nothing is eternal. not even the joys that i receive from the pretty flowers in my garden.therefore, i attempt to realize what i call the reality of natural phenomena.

Morning Flowers

All of you have come to my garden

I never went to invite
All the joys and pleasures that you have given
I mused in them in respite.
But when you go as going is certain
And beat me adieu loosing all the fragrance
I shall wait gaze and gain
The tearless truth of impermanence.
 
Thus, (while you live) the joys I receive
At death, insight they serve
I am afraid my emotion would deceive
And stray my path for love.


Submitted: June 12, 2008

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indiefreak

Great poem! True nothing is eternal in the world, but even after death, there's no end at all:)

Thu, June 12th, 2008 12:58pm

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yeah. it s an unending process. there is rebirth i believe in it too. of course because there r reliable evidences. but, indie do u belive that we can make an stop to all our births and deaths. i mean, 'i' or 'u' nothing. that may sound little complcated and stange but i feel there is a way to stop the cycle of our births and death. anyway, that wasn't what i really meant in my poem. my point is very simple - not to be attached or too much cling to beauty. if we do we will have to suffer. beauty is for appreciation which we all must do. but if that fades, for example the morning flowers, than we must try to accept the reality of nature. however, morning flowers is only an example. there r many more things that we meet in our life and hope not to lose. yet we have to.........

Fri, June 13th, 2008 10:38pm

Pratibha

Is he your father who wrote this above....??? Lovely....

And ur poem is too good......too good.... u must be very very young

Fri, June 13th, 2008 5:25pm

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thanks 4 ur commeny. but, question ta bujte parlam na. apni bangla bhalo janen jene khusi holam. in fact, amio banglay study korte parini beshi. yet, i practice bangla speaking and writing with whomever i can. ami banglayo kobita practice kori. u can browse - www.sonajhuri.com not this month's issue. but go to the PATAJHURI ARCHIVEs. and the 44th issue there. THANKS!!!

Fri, June 13th, 2008 10:29pm

air

^_^ A most Wonderful poem! and a story as well ^_^
I will look forward to reading more of your postings Upali, thankyou for sharing with us ~katie

Sat, June 14th, 2008 3:48pm

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Thanks 4 ur appreciations Katie!!!!

Mon, June 16th, 2008 3:18am

Pratibha

DEAR UPALI, the comment on that poem of urs wih a great story must have been written by ur BABA...is it???

Mon, June 16th, 2008 1:58am

EdwardJBradleySr

Upali Sramon:

Read this last night and gave it an "I Like It" vote, but no comment.

This is well written and expressed idea/s of transitory beauty and sensual pleasure. Better than none at all. Still! Never enough.

Thank you for becoming a new fan.

If you have not done so already, please read and rate my postings of "Love Intended: #1, #2 & #3", "Our Grampa Ed", "Excitement Inspired...." and "Self Love".

Again! Thank you!

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Tue, June 17th, 2008 1:09am

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