Locked In (I know its bad)

Book by: UrbanBuddha

Summary

A song I wrote when I was bored at school, I realise its awful, please don't give trolling feedback, I'd like some constructive criticism if possible :p

Chapter1 (v.1) - Locked In (I know its bad)

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A song I wrote when I was bored at school, I realise its awful, please don't give trolling feedback, I'd like some constructive criticism if possible :p

Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: July 27, 2012

Reads: 114

Comments: 9

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Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: July 27, 2012

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Trapped without a kay
stuck in an unfamiliar place
without hope

I can surely say that
I'm locked in

without hope of freedom
without company
with noone else
I'll formulate a scheme
I'll break free

As the Oxygen runs low

searching desperately for hope
learning nothing new

Feeling light headed
losing my grip on sanity
so long I've been
locked in

A prisoner of my own mind

just when I think I'm about to slip
I find the key
A way free of this hell

Without word or warning
you set me free
you let me feel
you gave me reason
without you I could not be

thank you
now I'm free

I'll never be locked in again
I'll keep my key close
I'll never let you go

because without it,
Without you
I'll be left
locked in


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A song I wrote when I was bored at school, I realise its awful, please don't give trolling feedback, I'd like some constructive criticism if possible :p
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