The Missing Love

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A couple arent able to discover and find love between them because of their arrange marriage even after many years of them together.Suddenly a third person comes and their life changes,then killings happen..
Find out who does what....

THE MISSING LOVE

Genre—Psychological /Erotic Thriller(18+)

Characters—

David Miller (30 years)

Maria Miller(30 years)

Mitchell Wolowitz(20 Years)

 

Its somewhere late 20th century.David and Maria were arranged marriaged.They both seemed exteremly happy at first but after sometime they realized that they both never loved each other.David was a senior vice-president at an MNC while Maria used to give home tutions to first year college kids.Due to lack of love between them they never interfered in each other’s work.One day david comes home to maria with a new diamond ring but maria threw it away because of some anger/frustration.David shocked to see it snapped out of the room but didnt say a word to her and then he slams the door.Immediately after that  there  door is knocked,Maria opens it with tears in her eyes and sees Mitchell.
A Strapping young, Tall lad with a charming smile on his face,he asks if she was Maria.?? Maria seeing  him asks him if he was a student and had came for classes, to which Mitchell replies in the affirmative.
They sit down and Mitchell takes his books out but he sees that Maria was crying and he asks what had happened.Maria shuts him up and they start their class . After an hour or so Maria asks him about his doubts and says the class for today is over, to which Mitchell asks only one question that what had happened to her before the class.Maria snaps at him and asks him to leave. Hearing that noise David wakes up and sees her wife sobbing to which he remains unperturbed.
The same happens for a few more days with Mitchell asking her only about what is happening with her and why is she upset.After a while she tells him that she is very unhappy now with her marriage and wants to be loved.Mitchell sees this and holds her hand in an affectionate way and comes close to her.
Maria gets her hand away and says that that was wrong and she was married, but Mitchell forces himself onto her and kisses her without her willingness.Maria wanting to get away slaps him, but kisses him back again and they go in her bedroom and make love.
They talk to each other at night when David is asleep and meet when he is not at home.Suddenly Maria feels that she has found the love of her life and it was Mitchell.

One day david hears her on the phone at night talking to someone and fixing a meeting when he is not at home. He thinks that he is interpreting wrongly,but he was met with a shock when he saw 3-4 packets of contraceptive pills in her drawer and most of them were half empty.So to confirm that his wife was really cheating on him or not he checks his phone records and sees nearly 200 calls at a same number.
Now he confronts her personally and asks about this guy.Maria shocked replies in the negative.But David throws the phone bill and the contraceptive tablets at her face to prove it.Maria seeing that and fear of being caught,faints and falls on the ground.
David unable to cope up with that truth hangs himself in the bedroom.And leaves a suicide note telling her that he loved her.
Maria gets up and sees her husband hanging.Seeing that she immediately calls Mitchell several times  but their was no answer. Then she calls the police which take the body away and search the house for clues, where they find a cell phone.
Officer asks about the mobile but maria says that it was not her’s and neither of her husband also.Officer leaves the phone with her and leaves with his team with the body.Maria calls Mitchell again , to her shock that mobile phone rang which the officer left with him.
Now she realizes that their really was no Mitchell or her student for that matter.She just made him up to cope up with her sexual needs and her failed love life.She realizes that Mitchell was  a kind of guy she always wanted but got a non loving husband instead that’s why she used to see him.Now she remembers the pills , the classes of Mitchell were all false and Mitchell was just a man Made up by her mind.Unable to believe what had happened with her, and weak at heart she also hangs herself with the same rope his husband hung himself.After some days the neighbours bang in David’s house because of her decaying corpse and to their shock they see Maria hanging with a very sweet  and prolonged SMILE on her face………

 

Please comment below and give your feedback..:)
Thanx for reading..:)


 

 


Submitted: May 28, 2013

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aruntp

really a dramatic short story. i love each sentences. nicely presented. you can develop this theme. In return kindly read my short story "love a curse spelled" and comment. thanks for writing to me.

Fri, May 31st, 2013 8:47am

Author
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Thanx arun..:)

Fri, May 31st, 2013 4:51am

Syna

wow, man i think, i agree with Aruntp . it's really a dramatic story but i like it... but i would suggest u to add more information so it make much sence :D cheer

Fri, May 31st, 2013 12:58pm

Author
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thanx for your feedback..:)
ill try and improve on the next one..:)
relly appreciate it..

Fri, May 31st, 2013 10:30am

Syna

more*

Fri, May 31st, 2013 12:58pm

Author
Reply

really*

:D

Fri, May 31st, 2013 10:33am

Irish wolf hound

Please add some more to this. I really enjoyed the drama and I want more! You have a way with words.

Mon, June 3rd, 2013 5:44am

Author
Reply

Adding something more might make it boring...Thats why i keep it really short to keep the reader engaged..
thank you for your feedback..:)
i will make my next one better..:)

Sun, June 2nd, 2013 10:58pm

JessGS

There's a good plot here, but it needs developing more. At the moment it doesn't make much sense as you appear to just be laying out the idea, not telling it. There was also a few mistakes, you put - "their" but you need, "there" for it to make sense. I like the idea though - it's good! Please could you take a look at some of my writing to see what you think? It would mean a lot, thank you! Hope my advice is helpful but want to make it clear I like this story!

Wed, June 5th, 2013 8:56am

Author
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Ohhhh..
sorry for the grammatical mistakes..:D
it just happens..:P
thank you for your feedback..:)
i will surely look your work soon..:)

Wed, June 5th, 2013 3:33am

mishty

Umm... The story is okay. But there are numerous silly grammatical errors. :) Correct them and the story will become real good. :)Keep it up.

Thu, June 6th, 2013 5:58am

Author
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thank you for your feedback..:)
ill correct them soon..:)

Thu, June 6th, 2013 2:56am

NobleStarAisha

Nice concept..But it really requires editing and correction of grammar.

Fri, June 7th, 2013 9:45am

Author
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thank you for your feedback..:)
ill correct them soon.:)

Fri, June 7th, 2013 3:07am

AbstractKash

Great read ^_^ I was hooked from start to end.

Fri, June 7th, 2013 10:36am

Author
Reply

Thank you..:)
Read some of my other stories also..
i am sure you wouldn't be disappointed..:)

Fri, June 7th, 2013 4:18am

GuiltyPleasure

The plot is promising no doubt but you could make it more detailed. On the whole i liked it, it boldly deals with a common and concealed phenomenon. Cheers!!!

Sun, June 23rd, 2013 11:07am

Author
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Thank you.^_^

Sun, June 23rd, 2013 5:07am

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