i love the sarrow of my being

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
It was a poem I wrote after my ex fiance dumped me and when my current girlfriend read it she said I should share it

Submitted: April 08, 2008

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The burn of life gets us down.

we can not breath we can not frown.

we wear a crown of sorrow.

like the love of our life drowns our hopes and dreams.

we fall into sorrow deeper and deeper till we can not breath

can not see the walls get smaller and smaller in this tunnel of sorrow

as we plunge deeper into what we will become which is nothing more then a memory of the one’s that we loved who crushed us.

We try to swim up towards the light but the depression falls and pulls us down deeper and deeper into sorrow

how will we get out how will we stand up with our head down low sunk over ourshoulders.

with tears in my eyes and cuts on my hands I try to swim up out of this tunnel of sorrow.

I start to loose conciseness as I close my eyes and slowly die.

But I do not cry I do not try to climb up I let the darkness take me into the nothingness just like it dose to everyone else before me.


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