Welcome to Acward love...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

errmmm yea... this is kind of a romantic comedy... i think ;) lolz i laughed when i first thought about it.

Mark's P.O.V.

It started with a few friendly pushes. That evolved into a great friendship, in fact we became best friends. Though she was a girl and i am a guy it's still all the same. We went over to eachother's houses all the time.... Infact our parents knew eachother, quite well afterwards, they had to meet all the time. My mom and dad were divorced andi lived with my dad. Her mom and dad were divorced and she lived with her mom.

"So Sara... i was wondering... if you might like to..." I started to say.

"Might like to...?" she asked.

"Come to dinner with me tonight?" god she's beautiful. Big brown eyes, dark brown hair, tight fitting shirts.... skinney jeans, docmartens, perfect face, siren's voice, perfect body... 5"7, and well... DAMN she's hott! i thought. I realized i was staring, with a quick glance i looked at her face, then looked away. SHE WAS BLUSHING!

"SURE!" Sara said exitedly, though with a hint a shyness in her voice. shyness? where did that comefrom? The bell rang and we headed off to English together, well this is normal... for us right? thought after thought ran through my head. We took our seats, next to eachother, and got out our books. i took out a pencil and a piece of paper.

Sara's P.O.V.

He asked me out! ON A DATE! EEK! i thought as i sat down. Mark was a perfect image of an emo boy (minus the cuts). Black hair, vivid blue eyes, hair over left eye, skinny jeans, doc martens, sculpted face, shirts, zip-up jackets, tall, yea basically ABSOLUTLY PERFECT! he passed me a note:

I cant believe you said yes!are you positive you do?

i read it and laughed quietly then wrote back:

Of course i do Mark. you really are dumb you know that? so is this like a... date?

I passed it back. after reading it Mark wrote back:

It is if you want it to be altyou do want it to be a date right?

Yes i do. :) where are we going?alt

It's a secret alt

darn alt

The teacher walked by my desk. I hurriedly put away the note.

"Have something to share with us miss smith?" Mr. Mcgraiver asked.

"No sir."

"Fine then... would you mind telling us what a hyperbolie is?"

"no sir. A hyperbole is ab obvious and intentional exaggeration or an extravagant statement or figure of speech not intened to be taken literally."

"Good dictionary definition... ill see you after school for detention miss Smith." Then he went back to teaching.

aww crap.... see what you did! alt


Mark's P.O.V.

we went out for quite a while. One day we were at her house. it was our two year anaversary. I takeled her.

"Haha i got you!" I said and started tickleing her.

"Haha st-stop! it-t!" She stuttered between laughing. Sara pushed me off then sat on her bed. I followed but pulled her onto my lap and kissed her passionatly. My tounge proded her lips gently until she opened her mouth and let our tounges combine. One thing led to another and we were under the sheets... Knock Knock Knock! Came the door.

"oh crap..." I whispered... The door opened.

"Hey why is this door cl- oh my gosh..." Sara's mom said, my dad was standing behind her... here came an acward silence. Sara and i sat up with ourselves covered by the sheets...

"Umm... Hey mom...." Sara said..

"Hi dad." I said. "If you guys close the door we'll uhh get dressed..."

"Yeah good idea." My dad said and pulled her out. When we got dressed we went down stairs and sat on the couch. "Uhhh Sara Mark... we have something to tell you... Maggie and I are getting married." Maggie is sara's mom by the ways.

"WHAT!" Sara and I yelled together. as My dad and i got in the car. my dad looked over at me with a cockey grin.

"So uhh... how far did you get?" dad asked.

"Oh my gosh! shut up dad!" and that's it... the most extreme amount of acwardness...

Submitted: May 12, 2008

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Ha Ha this is a funny story! I really loved the ending. It was cute. Though poor Mark and Sara! If their parents get married it means they can't date anymore. Ha Ha but great job! Work really hard on punctuation and capitalization though; you also had a few typos. Other than that great job! And boy do I just love emo boys:)

Sun, June 8th, 2008 2:07am


LOL! yea i noticed those AFTER i posted it and im just to lazy to undo those..

Sat, June 7th, 2008 9:23pm


write more lol

Tue, July 1st, 2008 12:57am


lol that's the end of the short story though ROFL

Wed, July 2nd, 2008 11:41pm

Poison Passion

make a sequel!!!! have sara's mom and mark's dad divorce so sara and mark can go out again!!!! i totally loved the story, but i hate that they cant date anymore!!!!! arrgggggg!!!!!! i want sara and mark together-not their parents!!!!!! plz plz plz make a sequel!!!!!!!!!! haha, i loved how you had their parents walk in on them, a totally great story. keep writing!!

Sun, July 6th, 2008 7:27pm


nope no sequel lol! sorry but it was ment just as a comedic short story. i thank you for the love tho

Fri, July 25th, 2008 11:06pm

Poison Passion

oh and by the way, i'm not trying to be rude, but there are some misspelled words I noticed. but other than that the storyw as wonderful!!

Sun, July 6th, 2008 7:29pm


thx i noticed lol. but thank you for the feed on how it was ;)

Fri, July 25th, 2008 11:05pm


make it a NOVEL, lol. Good work

Fri, May 22nd, 2009 3:57pm


lol! you think? hmmm maybe... it can go into my "maybe" folder....

Fri, May 22nd, 2009 3:58pm

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