Vampire Remorse part 2

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic

this is the second part to vampire remorse I this one is passionated and with a sad end hope you like them

My remorse, your fun,

oh God you've turned your back on us,

creatures of the night that feed on life.

Dante... you threw away your cape

and the mistery it has, revealing who you really are.

Ain't nothing else i would wish for,

but Damn i can't lie, i want you so bad.

You kiss my neck, opening the shower curtain,

your body slick with desire.

The blood in my body has not completely go away,

and you tighten your hands around my breast.

The grip is hard,

i can feel the way you want,

your mouth with my nipples inside, this fire is burning hard.

whispering words that made my non- beating heart

try to revive, as you push me to the wall.

God how sweet your taste is, your hands are naughty and so are you,

but i can't stop wanting this...

Picked me up, while i crossed my legs behind your back,

you are so storng oh love of mine.

Part I is done, now i'm in your arms, you carry me out,

to our bed with black petals and your scent.

Massacre of love, you devour my flesh with increasing speed,

you bite my neck and slowly drink as moans escape my lips.

Behind the groans and crimson eyes, our nature of vampires attack,

but i know we want it bad.

Down on my knees and begging for more more,

how i've fallen to your flesh oh love.

My green eyes look lifeless, tough i am also alive

and dead at the same time.

You pin me against the bed,

kiss me everywere, sensations i can't witheld.

300 years and you still are the same,hate me, love me, kill me, fuck me.

Master the blood never goes away,

and i'm hunted at night by their faces.

In times like this, i swear sometimes you have a heart,

that beats and cares for me like a human would have.

No more i would say, but how i love to see the dead,

you've placed upon me this curse.

Another night alive and tomorow, more will die

why? oh Dante i kill for you and i.

The life of a vampire is not easy,no,

i've lived like this for far too long.

Time calls but it never ends,

300 years of massacre and fame,

Dante where will i go without you my love?

oh my king go to sleep,

i'll kiss your forehead and force myself to leave,

i don't want to go but i cannot keep this up,

i'm not going to cry, tough my eyes are growing blurry,

i have to leave for i cannot stay here with what is growing inside of me,

Dante... this life isn't what i want for our soon to be child,

i'll miss you, i will, but i've been cursed to this....

Submitted: November 10, 2008

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Mon, November 10th, 2008 7:09pm


Thanx! is vampires after all!

Mon, November 10th, 2008 11:46am

S.C. Kross

ummm. well yeah.... I'm sorry, I'm I dunno. I'm not a very..*Cough,Cough* sexual person and this just sort iof pushed me out there I guess. It's a good poem though. Nice....
Uh...yeah. I just don't want to say...But um the challenge was to a write a piece on how you fictionally joined the coven. It's still good but I'm a little confused.

Mon, November 10th, 2008 10:26pm


oh that's ok, thanx

Mon, November 10th, 2008 2:40pm


Wow, DID NOT EXPECT THAT! Very cool, very steamy. *I think it moved! lol* And how, inventive, seductive, i like.


Thu, November 20th, 2008 12:37am


thanks hot and spicy hell yeah!

Thu, November 20th, 2008 12:42pm

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