this is a poem about wanting to be accepted and loved

I'm hurt all the time.

Ijust want someone to hold me.

I'm alone in the dark,

If no one cares I don't see the point going on.

Ijust don't want to be alone any more.

I'm scared, can no one hear me?

Is there anyone out there who cares?

I just want someone to take me away from all the mysery

and put an end to all the pain.


Submitted: April 15, 2010

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Adelaide DeWitt

well done
so much emotion
grate job :)

Thu, April 15th, 2010 7:07am

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Thanks!

Sat, April 17th, 2010 4:45am

bitobunny98

Thats in my soul but anyway good job!

Wed, May 12th, 2010 1:13pm

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Thanks. I really aprsheate you taking time to read my work:)

Wed, May 12th, 2010 8:21am

darkman1408

that wassn't what i would call uplifting, but it was a good poem

Sat, June 12th, 2010 12:53pm

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Ha Yeah! I guess it's not your type of thing. You should check out some of my other stuff, which i'm sure you'll like. Thankyou for your comment:)

Wed, June 16th, 2010 1:05pm

MYSTERYgirl

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww sho shad!

Sun, September 12th, 2010 4:50am

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Yeah, I write alot of depressing stuff as I am kind of emo, but I write all sorts of other things as well. I am glad you liked it!

Sun, September 12th, 2010 7:06pm

quetzala

sad a lot of emotion

Thu, November 20th, 2014 8:42pm

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Thank you :)

Sat, November 22nd, 2014 8:48am

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