The creatue of the night

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

A horror story about a dark creature

As I was walking down a street
through the broken slums
I began to hear some horrible sounds,
Coming from a crumbled home.
I didn't want to venture there
But the sounds drew me in.
Where I saw something so evil, it must have been sin.
Its face was a jumble of freakish teeth
With a black tongue that slivered
Over two blank red eyes beneath.
Then the redeyes became alive
And somehow forced me to stare
At them.
In those eyes I saw unbearable things
Of people being ripped apart
Of drinking of blood and eating of gore.
Then I was thrown into its jaws
By some unknown force
That felt like gnarled claws.
After much pain and ripping sounds
I was cast into the cold
Where I live breathing my last
A lone and forgotten mold
I think I know what gave me fright
What killed and tortured I
I think that fear itself murdered me tonight


Submitted: April 17, 2010

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Adelaide DeWitt

GRATE POEM
I LUVED IT

Sat, April 17th, 2010 12:52pm

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Thanks!

Sat, April 17th, 2010 9:13pm

Bobbi Porter

wooow, that was great and so original! My goodness, I think I'm going to read some more of your work, this was just great!

Mon, April 26th, 2010 1:13pm

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Thanks so much!

Mon, April 26th, 2010 6:36pm

bitobunny98

WOW I LOVE IT ITS GREAT ITS AWESOME!!

Wed, May 12th, 2010 1:18pm

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thankyou so much for your comment:)

Wed, May 12th, 2010 9:09am

quetzala

wow loved this poem great job on this

Thu, November 20th, 2014 8:45pm

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Thanks so much :) I am glad you liked it

Sat, November 22nd, 2014 8:48am

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