This is something that I wrote two year ago. It was what i was feeling at the time. Now i am sharing it with you.

You say you love me and then you go and hurt me.

Then you come back acting as though nothing has happened.

One minute you’re nice the and next I am nothing but a stranger to you.

Why do you keep toying with my emotions?

Why do you keep messing with my head?

I can’t stand this anymore!


You have hurt me enough, I can’t let this go on any longer.

I have tried to be understanding.

I have been patient, but now I don’t see the point in letting this continue.

It’s like I’m trapped in this continuous cycle, falling into the same trap.

So I am ending this right now, before we both get hurt.

I have given you enough chances; I can’t keep pretending it hurts too much.

This has to end now.


Don’t try to make me feel guilty, you know you’re the one at fault.

Don’t try to apologise , it’s already too late.

I have nothing to say to you.

We are finished and there is nothing you can do.

There is no going back.

I can’t stay with you because I know that you are only going to hurt me.

I can’t stay with you because I know I’ll just end up getting my heart broken

Submitted: July 07, 2011

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Thomas Mind


I have been here before. Your writing is perfect, sometimes it is best to just say it. Well done!


Thu, July 7th, 2011 11:49am


Thankyou so much! Yeah I know it can be terrible but you just have to move on. I am glad that you liked it

Thu, July 7th, 2011 5:04am

Rose Killson

I can relate to that alot. Great job

Thu, July 7th, 2011 8:35pm


Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it

Fri, July 8th, 2011 4:50am

fresh spirits

This is so realistic and heartfelt)

Sun, July 10th, 2011 2:05pm


Thankyou!It is baised on a true story

Tue, July 19th, 2011 5:33am


yeah that wa sright to end it just right then!!
i luuuuuuuuvvveeeddd it! you awesome as ever!

Fri, July 29th, 2011 10:49am


Naww thankyou! that is really sweet. thanks so much for your wonderful comment

Sun, July 31st, 2011 5:12am

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