Dark betrayal

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

A gothic poem

Dark Betrayal
Around, all around, the shadows gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart.
It severs me, and darkly my
essence drips
to the cold, uncaring tombstones.
In numbness I call your name
while my doom laughs cruelly.
Now alone, my love falls upon darkened eyes.

This is because of you


Submitted: March 09, 2010

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Jharra Logan

Vampiredoll i love this poem :)
its dark and filled with emotion
the titel matches perfectly with the poem :)
well done :)

Fri, March 12th, 2010 7:45am

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Thanks, I find the title is one of the hardest parts to make.

Fri, March 12th, 2010 6:55pm

White Demon

An absolutely stunning piece, so much said in one verse. Brilliant!

Tue, March 23rd, 2010 6:51am

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Thanks!

Tue, March 23rd, 2010 2:31am

hawaii

wooooooooow! thats really deep! in such a short verse of a poem, you have once again managed to inspire me and everyone else for that matter cause that was good. I LOVE THE HEADING! i love it because it sounds like something that came out of a novel or a movie :-) xx

Thu, July 15th, 2010 3:34pm

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Aw! Thanks. It was written in a really short time and i wasnt sure how well it would go.

Thu, July 15th, 2010 8:38am

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