Poem by: Vampy2034
Submitted: February 01, 2012
Deep pools, so enticing,
Sparkling with joy,
or smoldering with anger,
Soft from tenderness,
or glazed with morose,
His eyes are a wonder no matter the mood.
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Sasori of the red sand
this is different i never seen anything this good telling about a person's eyes keep up the good work :) *clicks the like button* i hope you write more.
Thank you. I am trying to access your oage in general but it won't let me. It might be this computer, so therefore, I will tonight at home. :) I look forward to it!
Oooooo! Nice, deep, love it! This is my favorite short poem i had every read! And i read alot! :) I love it how you can put so much emotion and detail in such a small poem! Ugh wish i could do that!!!!! -__-' lololol
Well thank you very much :3 and I love your poetry so hush :P
Very nice! I love how your capture his dual nature.
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