*Deep Dark Red Rose

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

it's about making someone your priority by helping them in every way, while they take advantage and walk all over you.. you stare blind at their faults, 'cause they mean the world to you.. the rose in this poem is a symbol of that someone..

Deep dark red rose

Depressed! 

You're hidden in a bunch of those 

You get pinched by their thorns and smothered by their leafs

but you love their smell, so you can't even tell

They blurred out your site and concord your soul

but you keep watering them

To help them grow tall

So depressed you'll stay

Until another day

but the deep dark red rose just won't ever go away..


Submitted: November 11, 2011

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YaSoora

I pressed like!
Another great poem of yours...WONDERFUL! It is true and passionate..!

Mon, November 14th, 2011 3:35pm

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thanks, i appreciate you're support!! :D

Tue, November 15th, 2011 2:26am

Richard Staschy

Deep and moving... :)

Fri, November 18th, 2011 6:06pm

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TANKS :)

Wed, November 30th, 2011 6:18am

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