*heart's delay

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

a poem about that horrible feeling everybody gets from time to time, that we just can't explain..

alone... no one knows...

it's hard... painful..

confusing.. horrible..

terrible.. can't take it away..

 

sad.. angry..

worse.. awful..

regretful.. not my fault..

like I'm a freak.. like I don't belong..

 

unhappy.. dead..

not myself.. weird..

not normal.. bad feelings..

wrong feelings.. ashamed..

 

missing something..

missing someone.. incomplete..

right in the wrong way..

all because of my heart's delay..


Submitted: November 09, 2011

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glitter snow426

oh so sad, truly cold and heartbreaking! You have summed up the words, COLD DOWNER, Great work, love it, very different,honest indeed!

Wed, November 9th, 2011 3:52pm

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thanks :)

Thu, November 10th, 2011 5:22am

van Graaff

thank a lot.. i love your work too! nice word choices..

Wed, November 9th, 2011 3:59pm

heavenly14

i love it imm actually creying as i type this for two reasons 1. its beautiful and truthful 2. its exactly how i feel and have been feeling for weeks now i love it

Wed, November 9th, 2011 8:37pm

Author
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thanks, i hope you feel better soon..

Thu, November 10th, 2011 5:18am

YaSoora

Simply Wonderful,sad and honest...

Thu, November 10th, 2011 4:28am

Author
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thank you.. i like your writing as well

Thu, November 10th, 2011 5:15am

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