Then, suddenly

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We fell through the ice

Submitted: June 22, 2012

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Not only did we hear them, but we saw them forming right before our eyes. Fractures. Exactly fifty-four yards out, shaking, we slowly turned around, teeth chattering...all of a sudden the ice gave way - we went under. Gone?

\"Where are we? This must be heaven.\"

\"The gold...it's transparent.\"

Seraphim's.

Cherubim's.

Jesus!


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