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Finished |
Genre: Other |
House:
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I told him I loved him
but he acts like a demon.
I'm sick of him. I don't want him, anymore.
He is rat poison.
poison my lungs and my heart. fake pain I'm immune. Let him grovel for forgiveness.
I won't forgive him.
I've already moved on.
I am the ocean.
just another tide... it does not matter to me.
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Comments
Comment | 21 words
Mon, January 28th, 2008 8:43pm
Meh, It could use some work. It just sounds too cliche. But keep working on it. I think it has potential.
Comment | 22 words
Mon, January 28th, 2008 10:26pm
it sounds like ur a bit angry at someone. good metaphor, just expand it a bit more :D
Peace to you too.
Comment | 11 words
Tue, January 29th, 2008 6:35am
A new CHAPTER of your life book - keep reading on.
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