A HEARTFELT PRAYER

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Its a prayer to the omnipotent to shower His blessings on my mate.

A HEARTFELT PRAYER

O Lord! My Heavenly Father! It’s me again;

Who invoke you for some great gain.

Here I place a mammoth plea for my mate,

Shower your blessings and alter her fate.

~

The hurdles she faced were hard to bear,

Your silence all these days though not fair.

Nothing good happens was her constant cry,

Words were scarce to wipe her tears dry,

~

Like a summer tempest comes now an offer,

To lift her hopes and set things proper.

O Lord! Embrace her with your tender grace,

Touch her with a magic wand to win the race.

~

Let all the barriers and thorns be parted,

And life’s pretty, velvet roses be granted.

Kindly lead her way with your eternal light,

And lift her to reach magnificent height.

~

O LORD! My Lord! Grant her the best of all,

This is my earnest prayer for my beloved pal.

Let her life be perfect  with no marks of stain

O Lord! My Heavenly Father! It’s me again.


Submitted: December 04, 2012

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EdwardJBradleySr

angelin:

Thought I would comment on this as well.

Always like to read prayerful and inspirational poetry. This is one of the best. Great writing.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote. Most well deserved.

Thank you, again, for becoming a fan. Appreciative and grateful.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Wed, December 12th, 2012 5:07am

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Thanks a lot sir.

Tue, December 11th, 2012 11:26pm

thumblina

nice.....keep updating

Fri, December 14th, 2012 7:10am

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sure. thanks.

Fri, December 14th, 2012 6:23am

Arid Land Kate

This was a lovely work. I thought the poem showed your caring and concern for not yourself but other people. Your poetry is brilliant, you can turn any topic into such a heartfelt poem in a mere page. Bravo!

Sun, December 16th, 2012 4:39am

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Thank you Kate. Ur encouraging words is a boost for me to write more.

Sat, December 15th, 2012 8:48pm

Begginer Writer For Fun

Again, nice choice of words :)
I like the 14th and 18th lines the most.

Sun, December 16th, 2012 7:37am

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Thank you.

Sun, December 16th, 2012 1:26am

Matthew Zabala

That was so heartfelt. I could sense the desperation in it. I wrote a prayer/poem as well, called "An Addict's Prayer." You should check it out. I think you might like it. Phenominal job on this. It flowed very smoothly!

Mon, December 17th, 2012 5:51pm

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Thanks a lot. Sure will check it.

Mon, December 17th, 2012 4:03pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

God answered your prayer, but you are deserted, I caught that in your comment to Entity. A great prayer/poem.

Sat, December 22nd, 2012 1:29am

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Thanks a lot.

Sat, December 22nd, 2012 7:30am

pretty blue

It is excellent. I can understand how much you love ur mate and it is filled your deepest care and lovable affection. The whole poem is effective with a perfect rhyme. Keep it up !

Sat, December 22nd, 2012 4:32pm

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Thanks.

Sun, December 30th, 2012 9:54am

Gagan

A devotional masterpiece, which is composed from the most honest depth of the heart. Truly speaking, once I finished it, I also silently prayed for you and the person for whom this poetry is written.

Sun, December 23rd, 2012 9:13am

Author
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Thanks a lot Gagan for complimenting it as a masterpiece. Thanks for ur sincere prayers too.

Sun, December 23rd, 2012 1:22am

smruti

marvelous writing dear...your love towards your friend can easily understand after reading this...liked and loved it..well deserve.love to be your fan after reading this..

Sun, December 23rd, 2012 4:09pm

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Thanks a lot for commenting on all my poems. so kind of u dear. Take care.

Sun, December 23rd, 2012 8:13am

meenakshi sharma

tht was so nice yar .. i just loved it .. well done .. :) :) TC

Wed, December 26th, 2012 12:13pm

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Thanks for ur kind review. Take care.

Wed, December 26th, 2012 4:42am

Ella Lynn

This is beautiful and strongly worded! I'm sure God listens to you and is proud of you for this WONDERFUL poem! You have talent and are amazing with words!

Fri, December 28th, 2012 1:18am

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Thanks a lot for ur kind review.

Thu, December 27th, 2012 5:35pm

Izzie Thomas

I love how well this flows. Full of heart and passion. You can feel the emotion in this one. Works that are capable of that are the best. I like this one very much. :)

Fri, January 11th, 2013 9:56pm

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Thanks for ur sincere comments. Happy that you liked it.

Fri, January 11th, 2013 4:41pm

Buffershaker

Truly inspiring piece of poetry which lifted my spirits and re-newed my faith in God via prayers.The power of prayer is much underestimated,"God always gives us what we need", though to some they think that he doesn't listen when in their hour of need they need his help the most.

Sun, February 10th, 2013 3:31pm

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Thanks Eileen for ur inspiring comment. Glad that u liked it.

Tue, February 12th, 2013 4:24am

Lisa Ayers

Truly inspiring, heartfelt and selfless.
One of my favorite types of writing.
Sorry you feel deserted.
Keep inspiring!

Sun, March 17th, 2013 7:22am

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Thanks a lot.

Sun, March 17th, 2013 5:05am

Night And Day

This was amazingly beautiful Angelin. Wonderful job! :)

Sun, March 17th, 2013 9:59pm

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THANKS A LOT..

Mon, March 18th, 2013 7:50am

Poetlife

AMEN to your prayer.
Very Good keep up the great work,.
I am commenting because you asked me to,(Yet I am sure I would have found your work sometime?)
Your line,
"Your silence all these days though not fair".
The Lord answers our prayers,.
Do we listen? To Him, His Voice, His chosen ones, writings?

May be you can come by sometime and leave comments on some of my work too?
I know India.
Blessings,
In His light & love.

Tue, March 26th, 2013 12:09am

Author
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Thanks a lot. I too would read urs.

Mon, March 25th, 2013 11:58pm

Elena ArtistiC

This is BRIALIANT! I am so moved! Good job!

Tue, March 26th, 2013 10:36am

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Thanks a lot. If time permits check my other poems too.

Tue, March 26th, 2013 8:00am

Criss Sole

I thought this was very sweet and heartfelt. It was very touching to see such a selfless prayer.

Fri, May 10th, 2013 11:04am

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Thank so much. Glad that this poem impressed u.

Fri, May 10th, 2013 8:13am

quiet dreamer

this is very good, too. It's very cute to pray for another person like this. Hope your mate feels better by now.

Sun, September 22nd, 2013 8:42am

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Thank u so much. Yea my fate is fine now.

Sun, September 22nd, 2013 1:46am

Amandine Rose

Wonderful! A sincere heartfelt prayer in an amazing tone.

Tue, October 15th, 2013 3:36pm

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Thanks a lot.

Tue, October 15th, 2013 9:22am

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