A LOVABLE COMPANY

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

To be with the company of children is real pleasure. I could say its a tonic to ease your mind and heart.

A LOVABLE COMPANY
The moment I step foot on my work place,
I feel the best with a smile on my face.
The orphan, the destitute, the helpless gather there,
A collection of real life's tragedy swarmed to care.
~
Walking around with these innocent kids so cool,
I teach them all day with love as a tool.
My duty is to foster the shy, timid child,
Taming and moulding none but the wild.
~
Love and kindness dwell under this roof,
Never will you feel that you are aloof.
Angels don't show such a charm,
A company where you feel no harm.
~
When a child says," You are my favorite,"
You feel your commitment is all right.
Thanks to God for granting me this job,
A secured place , no regrets to sob.


Submitted: December 09, 2012

© Copyright 2020 Vasanthi Papu. All rights reserved.

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EdwardJBradleySr

angelin:

Just finished reading and voting for all of your postings. Decided to comment on this one.

Interesting, original, descriptive, filled with gratitude, well written and presented. Good use of rhyming and rhythm.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote. As with your other postings. All well deserved.

From a rhyming perspective: Do you think the last word in line 3 of verse 1 would better be "there" than "here". Just a thought.

Thank you for becoming a fan. Appreciative and grateful. You are most thoughtful, considerate and kind.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Wed, December 12th, 2012 5:04am

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Thanks for ur review sir. Sure I would edit the third line. It's really encouraging to receive comments and appreciation from such great writers. Thanks again.

Tue, December 11th, 2012 11:37pm

thumblina

lovly.......vry touching.......almost in tears read this work of yours........

Fri, December 14th, 2012 7:09am

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Yea I always sympathise with the poor students. But their love for u speak volumes. Thanks a lot for liking it.

Fri, December 14th, 2012 6:26am

Arid Land Kate

Ahh this was so sweet but also kind of sad...Your poetry is like a piece of art. You express so much on one page that was once empty.

Sun, December 16th, 2012 4:35am

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A million thanks to you for rendering ur valuable comments.

Sat, December 15th, 2012 8:54pm

Begginer Writer For Fun

I like you'r choice of words :)
So beautiful.

Sun, December 16th, 2012 7:33am

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Thanks a lot.

Sun, December 16th, 2012 1:25am

jiji chocolate sweet

great poem!!! full of emotions, I absolutely loved your choice of words!!! keep up the good work

Mon, December 17th, 2012 12:45pm

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yea sure. thanks.

Mon, December 17th, 2012 4:15pm

glitter snow426

beautiful, very unique, precious and AMAZING!!!!love it love it

Tue, December 18th, 2012 3:41pm

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thanks a lot.

Tue, December 18th, 2012 7:54am

sleepingwithsirens

Well written and I liked the rhyming scheme. I myself have worked with children and I know the joy they bring to everyday, monotonous, life.

Wed, December 19th, 2012 1:27am

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thanks a lot. Well said. Children make our living place a heaven.

Thu, December 20th, 2012 6:51am

Stormbird Throneshaker

Your poem tells us how well you love your job working with children. Perhaps you could write children's poems!
Just a thought that your poetry could also be a teaching tool as well.

Sat, December 22nd, 2012 1:14am

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Thanks for reading. Yea I am much devoted to my work. Thanks for ur kind suggestion. Will do it for sure.

Sat, December 22nd, 2012 7:33am

smruti

brilliant fellow writer....splendid work through your words.two beautiful job you r doing one with children another is writing...great poem

Sun, December 23rd, 2012 4:04pm

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Yea dear. Earlier I found peace and happiness only when I was with my students. Now I get some peace by composing poems as well. Thanks for ur compliments.

Sun, December 23rd, 2012 8:09am

Matthew Zabala

How beautiful. It is apparent that you are passionate about both writing, and your career as well. Writing always shines when the topic is something that you're very passionate about, as is the case here.

It flowed very smoothly, and the bold words at the end of each line was a nice touch!

Great job on this one.

Mon, December 24th, 2012 1:18am

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Thanks a lot. That's quite true. I have a deep passion for both. Glad to find ur comments here. Thank you.

Tue, December 25th, 2012 12:59am

Ava Rosien

I enjoyed this poem very much. I worked with people with disabilities for many years and I loved it. Hearing you speak of the children you teach is heartwarming.They are lucky to have a caring person like you in their lives.

A beautifully constructed poem and a joy to read!

Mon, December 24th, 2012 9:55am

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Thanks a lot. I know the difficulty in handling the disabled children. You have done a great job. Love u for ur dedicated service. sure god will bless you. Happy to have met u here.Thanks for sharing.

Tue, December 25th, 2012 12:52am

LightFeather09

This is a very beautiful poem ;) I enjoyed reading it :) good job :D

Wed, December 26th, 2012 5:21am

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Thanks a lot for sparing ur time and passing ur comments.

Tue, December 25th, 2012 9:56pm

sherry1

Now if only everyone who helps the children could be as dedicated as you are, the world would truly be a better place. Your poem shows your feelings come from the heart. Excellent work. :) Sherry

Wed, December 26th, 2012 7:06pm

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Thanks a lot sherry. Ur words mean a lot.

Wed, December 26th, 2012 4:31pm

arun

Ah! Poem about your job!
It was a good one. Keep writing.

Fri, February 1st, 2013 3:02pm

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Thanks for ur encouragement. Take care.

Fri, February 1st, 2013 11:40pm

attanasio

As mentors we can do so much to shape a cilds life. They watch us and learn so fast at such a young age. You patient and gentle spirit would make the perfect goal to the unorganized and sometimes wild spirit of the young. It makes me feel good just know there are people like you around to help influence them.

Good writing also!

Joe

Tue, February 19th, 2013 2:19pm

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Thanks a lot Joe. I have a plan of teaching the poor even after my retirement. God has to give me the much needed strength to serve such children...Those innocent children have to be uplifted and I will surely give the best of my ability.

Wed, February 20th, 2013 4:14am

ashi17

Beautiful poem with perfect rhyming, Good work dear. Keep writing and amazing your readers :))

Wed, February 20th, 2013 1:07pm

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Thanks a lot dear.

Wed, February 20th, 2013 5:42am

dynamic12

To teach children is always a wonderful experience. Their company, their smile, their childish behavior makes you relax. I could relate to this feeling totally.

A Big Thumps Up!! And A "LIKE" from me!!

Thu, February 21st, 2013 11:36am

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Exactly.It is a wonderful experience. I teach the higher form students and I enjoy their pranks and it is a lovely feeling. Thanks for sharing ur comment.

Thu, February 21st, 2013 4:30am

Miss A

100% agree with you on this. It is indeed a delight to interact with young minds as I believe they have lot to teach us rather than us teaching them.
I have had the good fortune to interact with young children albeit for a short time and I can say with guarantee , that it has been one of my most enriching experiences. And I would love to tread that path again given an opportunity....
Thank you for putting this poem up.It brought back some wonderful memories . :) :)

Sun, March 10th, 2013 9:55am

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Well said. It is an enriching experience and I love spending time with the children which makes u forget all worries. I derive a heavenly pleasure with their lovely pranks. Glad That u liked it. Thanks a lot for such a loving review..

Mon, March 11th, 2013 9:20am

Lisa Ayers

Such a warm heartfelt piece.

I enjoy meeting people who help others. I was required in college to complete clinical placement work. Working with children was one of them. Then spent many years working with people with physical and developmental disabities. I absolutely loved it. Especially the years I was the Director. As I could make a difference on a greater scale.
I definately share in your passion.

This is beautiful and well crafted.

I appreciate the invite and so glad I stopped by.
Nice to meet you. Let's stay connected.
Hope to hear from you soon.
~Lisa

Sun, March 17th, 2013 7:37am

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Thanks for ur earnest review and sharing ur thoughts. Much heartening to read such endearing comments. Glad that u liked my poem..

Sun, March 17th, 2013 5:07am

quiet dreamer

like this one, too. Hope it's okay if I show it to a friend of mine who's just studying to become a teacher and really likes children, too.

Sun, September 22nd, 2013 8:44am

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I am much delighted to know that my poems inspire someone to choose a profession.so kind of u. U don't have to ask. Kindly share it. Thanks a lot.

Sun, September 22nd, 2013 1:49am

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