MY SUPREME SOULMATE

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Pen, My Supreme soulmate

 

MY SUPREME SOULMATE

 O Supreme Pen! ‘You are mightier than the sword’

With the power to make or mar life next to the Lord.

A true source of comfort and support to the bard,

You afford me peace which is the greatest reward.

~

When tears drench my bleak eyes like a pool

I pour out my emotions holding you as a tool.

Then my heavy heart becomes light and cool

With the verve to trounce the world and rule.

~

Once I sit with you I gain the wisdom of a sage

And my thoughts roam free without any verge.

Had I not picked you at my worst falling stage

My life would have been just an empty page.

~

You touch my imagination like a magician’s wand

Giving shape to all those my intellect shall demand

You are so humble that I can hold you in my hand

And acquire the power to create an imaginary land.

~

Be it a moment of grief or an occasion of mirth,

You are the soulmate whom I rely on this earth.

Had you not shown me new visions to move forth

By now I would have left with no trace of my birth.

 

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BY VASANTHI PAPU

 

 

 

 


Submitted: January 11, 2014

© Copyright 2020 Vasanthi Papu. All rights reserved.

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quiet dreamer

I think I'm writing the same every time: but I love how you always choose wonderful topics for your poems. A poem for your pen... I think every author can relate to this. well done - again!
and thanks for always keeping me updated.

Sat, January 11th, 2014 8:04pm

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Thank u so much for such a wonderful feedback. And thanks for ur never-failing response too dear.so kind of u..

Mon, January 13th, 2014 7:37am

RedInkWriter

Really describes the power of the pen. Liked it.

Sat, January 11th, 2014 9:19pm

Author
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Thanks a lot. Glad that u liked it.

Mon, January 13th, 2014 7:37am

Irwinagain

A tribute to every writer's sometime friend who can also be the cause of much frustration!

Sun, January 12th, 2014 3:02am

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hahaha but Pen has always been a great companion to me in times of frustration. Thanks a lot for ur kind feedback.

Mon, January 13th, 2014 7:43am

Joel Twister

aww I dont really know,what to say your poem really amaze me

Sun, January 12th, 2014 11:16am

Author
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Hahaha thank u so much for ur positive comments dear.

Mon, January 13th, 2014 7:44am

chinky

wow! amazing. I wonder at your talent. The entire poem has the same rhyme scheme and you made it exceptionally well. How is it any theme you think of gets shaped as a master piece! Great job! Enjoyed reading it.

Sun, January 12th, 2014 12:43pm

Author
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Thank u so much for such a great compliment.. am honred by ur remarks. Glad that u enjoyed it.

Mon, January 13th, 2014 7:45am

Amandine Rose

Awesome! The themes you choose and the way you express your thoughts with your marvellous rhyme and choice of words make you an exceptional poetess. The second line is remarkable. The last two lines were really touching. Well done! Another great work from your magical pen.

Sun, January 12th, 2014 3:45pm

Author
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Thanks a lot for your loving compliments. Means a lot. Am happy to get such a feedback from u.

Mon, January 13th, 2014 7:47am

pretty blue

Beautiful! What a wonderful poem from your pen. You have proved your worth once again. The rhyme as usual deserves praise.Your poems not only delight us but also make us fall in love with it. Loved it a lot. Thanks for sharing such an excellent piece of poetry.

Sun, January 12th, 2014 3:50pm

Author
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Thanks a lot for ur positive comments. Glad that my poems delight u. Thank u.

Mon, January 13th, 2014 7:48am

Raga

U rock Vasanthi..I really loved your poem..sorry for being late..I m in love wid your poetries..keep the good work :)

Sun, January 12th, 2014 6:48pm

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Thank u so much Raga. Glad that u are in love with my poems. Am honored. Thank u..

Mon, January 13th, 2014 7:41am

Cesare777

The pen is a powerful tool for writing. And writing has power. Let me give you a famous sonnet by Quevedo, a famous Spanish poet, in this sonnet the poet writes something that goes beyond death itself. Such is the power of the word. Congratulations on your poem.

CONSTANT LOVE BEYOND DEATH

Perhaps whatever final shadow that
the shining day may bring could close my eyes,
and this my soul may well be set aflight
by time responding to its longing sighs;

but it will not, there on the farther shore
its memory leave behind, where once it burned:
my flame the icy current yet can swim,
and so severe a law can surely spurn.

Soul by no less than a god confined,
veins that such a blazing fire have fueled,
marrow to its glorious flames consigned:

the body will abandon, not its woes;
will soon be ash, but ash that is aware;
dust will be, but dust whose love still grows.

Mon, January 13th, 2014 11:26am

Author
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Thanks a lot for ur loving feedback and also for sharing a lovely poem worth reading.

Mon, January 13th, 2014 7:40am

glitter snow426

oh wow LOVE THIS, very true powerful, wonderfully told This certainly lit up my day, AWESOME COOL SINCERE!

Mon, January 13th, 2014 2:52pm

Author
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Thanks a lot for such a heartwarming review dear. Glad that u loved it.

Mon, January 13th, 2014 7:38am

stranger in the corner

Yea Verily the pen truly is mightier than the sword! you have described your bond with this powerful implement in a vary heartfelt way. Bravo!

Mon, January 13th, 2014 10:34pm

Author
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Thanks a lot for ur positive comment and also for ur never-failing support.

Tue, January 14th, 2014 3:08am

David S Grayson

What an awesome theme to write about! Like always, I loved every stanza, and your rhyming deserves a lot of praise, you did a fantastic job with this one. Keep it up, angelin!

Tue, January 14th, 2014 2:03am

Author
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Thank u so much for such a wonderful compliment David. Means a lot when it comes from u. Thanks again.

Tue, January 14th, 2014 3:11am

Ina mcfarmers

This is one of the best poems iv read on the well known phase of the pen is mightier than the sword & you prove this very well in this excellent poem -absoloutly brilliant , loved this poem and I'm going to book mark it as one of my favourites if that's ok with you .

Tue, January 14th, 2014 3:19am

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Thanks a million for ur heartwarming feedback. You can very well bookmark it.. You are most welcome and am honored by this kind deed of urs. I really appreciate it. Thanks again.

Tue, January 14th, 2014 3:07am

artie1947

oh! dear angelin what a wonderful piece you have put to word, just excellent, well done.

Tue, January 14th, 2014 10:23am

Author
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Thank u so much sir. am much delighted to get such a great compliment from u every time I share a poem.. so kind of u to spare ur time for me and render ur loving support and encouragement. Thanks a lot.

Tue, January 14th, 2014 3:32am

Sarahh365

Your poems are always gorgeous, I love them. Its the beautiful word choice, that gets me in this one. Anothert great one!

Wed, January 15th, 2014 5:11pm

Author
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Thanks a lot Sarahh for such a loving feedback.. Take care..

Wed, January 15th, 2014 9:16pm

Basilia

Wonderful..Inspiring poem about pen from your pen..you are versatile.. :) keep going !!

Thu, January 16th, 2014 10:45am

Author
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Thanks a lot for ur loving compliments dear.. Ur comments always raise up my spirits.. Thank u.

Sun, January 19th, 2014 7:23am

CyrusTheVirus

Good writing I am impressed lol be sure to read my short story coming soon "clown of terror"

Thu, February 6th, 2014 12:16am

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Thanks a lot for ur review.

Sun, February 23rd, 2014 7:51am

dynamic12

First of all sorry for arriving here to comment so late.
:( Now as for this poem, it is very beautiful and your thoughts about pen is very well expressed. All stanzas are great but the last one is my favorite. Great work!!

Tue, February 11th, 2014 1:44am

Author
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Thank u so much dear.. Ur comments mean a lot. Am really happy to receive such words from great poets like u..

Sun, February 23rd, 2014 8:02am

dj2000

Yes, a pen is every writers magic tool to express anything on a piece of paper. I love this one, good poem.

Fri, February 14th, 2014 4:56pm

Author
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Thanks a lot for sparing ur time to read and comment on my works. So kind of u..

Sun, February 23rd, 2014 7:56am

ashi17

Very well presented power of pen... Like sword and magic.
Very relatable work for all poets and writers.
Keep your pen moving dear...

Sat, April 12th, 2014 11:38am

Author
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Thanks a lot for ur loving feedback and words of encouragement. Take care.

Mon, April 14th, 2014 8:18am

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