I the fallen will revive

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

more self expressions, fueling ideas for my future Deathcore band

I'm thrown into the maze of my mind

Where every wall is made of glass

They hold reflections of you

I shatter through trying to find myself

Every shard leaves a burning scar

My wounds bleed your name

But i push through with this weak body of flesh

To find a stronger man in me

Through the pain I will find inner strength

A stronger me

This man of steel will shatter worlds

Open your eyes and see what i have become

Your living Fucking nighmare

Submitted: February 23, 2011

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OOHH wouldnt like any of my friends to become that. I really like your sense of understanding about feelings and this is exactly what a person would have become if they where betrayed.Like your advanced vocabulary you are using :)

Keep writing dark poems really helps you to release you inner feelings.Look how long this is :)

Really well written loved it!!!


Cherise :)

PS: I'm the first to comment isn't that sweet :) (joking :)

Tue, May 10th, 2011 4:10pm


Thanks :)

Tue, May 10th, 2011 1:24pm

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