I the fallen will revive

Miscellaneous by: Vassellucci

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more self expressions, fueling ideas for my future Deathcore band

I'm thrown into the maze of my mind

Where every wall is made of glass

They hold reflections of you

I shatter through trying to find myself

Every shard leaves a burning scar

My wounds bleed your name

But i push through with this weak body of flesh

To find a stronger man in me

Through the pain I will find inner strength

A stronger me

This man of steel will shatter worlds

Open your eyes and see what i have become

Your living Fucking nighmare

Submitted: February 23, 2011

Other death music angst fallen revenge hardcore

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SilentbutDeadly

OOHH wouldnt like any of my friends to become that. I really like your sense of understanding about feelings and this is exactly what a person would have become if they where betrayed.Like your advanced vocabulary you are using :)

Keep writing dark poems really helps you to release you inner feelings.Look how long this is :)

Really well written loved it!!!

XxX

Cherise :)

PS: I'm the first to comment isn't that sweet :) (joking :)

Tue, May 10th, 2011 4:10pm