I know it hurts.

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Just voicing my current feelings

I feel so lonely, even when you're near
You never seem to want me, so why are you still here?
You say you love me, but is it just routine
You used to make me happy,
Living to see my smile,
but you've stopped trying
and for a while now inside I've been crying,
My fake smile strong, yet behind it I'm dying,
Constantly weeping, no longer sleeping,
I've even stopped eating,
But my epiphany; For you, my heart is no longer beating.


Submitted: April 05, 2012

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Insane Membrane

nice work

Fri, April 6th, 2012 12:09am

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Thankyou! :)

Thu, April 5th, 2012 11:49pm

Vampy2034

Nice work. Sad that you feel that way though. Just remember things will get better

Fri, April 6th, 2012 2:20pm

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Thankyou hunny I will feel better soon. I guess I just don't see why someone would love me.

Fri, April 6th, 2012 8:05am

Brian W

A sad poem but one where you have expressed your emotions strongly...Maybe show this to the one it also is about....Things do not always run smoothly but with some effort they do work out...I write when feeling low as well....Well written

Tue, April 10th, 2012 7:11am

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Thanks Brian! I have tried but truth be told, he loves me but I think he struggles expressing it! He's either playing games or out with friends! x

Tue, April 10th, 2012 12:27am

Brian W

Many males have trouble expressing their feelings including myself....I hope he tried harder before it is too late or maybe it is :-( Only you two can decide...I wish you the best...

Tue, April 10th, 2012 7:35am

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thankyou! we're a lot better than last year. I think he's tried harder after he nearly lost me to a life-threatening illness xx

Tue, April 10th, 2012 12:41am

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