When you hold me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
This poem expresses how I feel about someone

Submitted: July 12, 2008

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Submitted: July 12, 2008

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When you hold me,
Begin to tremble
Heart beats faster
Soul so thirsty
Body straining, aching, longing
Senses heightened, reeling, spinning, colliding
A vivid kaleidoscope of colour
Lifting up, colour me
Passion building, soaring, ignites, 
Explodes, spiraling out,
Ripples upon ripples, expanding
Breathless, look at me
Love so pure, eternal
 
© Venus 2008


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