From the Heart

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
I wrote this around 1983. The person I wrote it for criticized my poetry and said that anyone could put together words that rhymed. He said, "Show me you can write something with great meaning and no rhyming" so this is what I wrote for him.

Submitted: October 22, 2013

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Submitted: October 22, 2013



Your emotions combine with mine

My pulsating veins feel your deepest emtions

Your most inner thoughts

And your feelings of desire


The depth of our feelings is so extreme

I feel the pain that you experience

And find the greatest joy in every bit

Of happiness that comes to you


I love being able to sense you,

Or to reach out and touch, and embrace you

I will remain a strong, positive stepping stone

To the best friend I've ever had


An incredible feeling of power errupts

As we are in a strong embrace

The electricity flows through my veins

And eventually, my blood begins to boil

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