Dwindled flame

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

I thought I was in love, but even if I loved you, we couldn't work out. You're starting to bore me and I want something more than this. Sorry xx

My feelings for you were hard to describe,

They burnt with a fever hard to ignite.

A raging inferno that had a short life,

I'm sorry.


I can not fool myself into the belief,

That you've stole my heart, just like a thief,

Don't mourn our past, it just causes grief,

I'm sorry.


The fire once strong has now turned to embers,

It's dwindled to ash and is hard to remember,

I may see you again, after September,

I'm sorry.






Submitted: April 03, 2012

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Liked the repetition of the line.."I'm sorry" and your rhyme scheme. C.

Mon, April 9th, 2012 7:04pm


I really like this and it shows your pity for him, easily. It gives the impression that you were never meant to have continued as your flames of passion soon subsided. Afterall, if Romeo and Juliet had lived, I doubt their love and passion would have stayed so bright and burning ...
Memories1995 xxx

Tue, April 24th, 2012 8:54am


I thought of the same thing ... it's cruel to pretend that your in love when you realise that your not ... one thing that hurts more than heart break is fake love ... thanks for the comment :)

Tue, April 24th, 2012 2:07am

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