(The cause of Loneliness)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Memoir  |  House: Booksie Classic

this poem expresses loneliness during a temporarely long distance realtionship.


My Loneliness is killeing my soul slowly

and rottening the debt of my core,

I long to disapear into his arms

hug him and never let go.

but right now alll I have is my loneliness

and a brain full of memories

Now I know why long distance relationships don't work

If I ahd to spend all my time away from him I would drown in my loneliness.

I can almost feel his broad shoulders holding me, and comforting me

He was always the only person who could always make me feel better

He was always there now it sucks not having him around everyday like I'm used to.

Submitted: June 21, 2009

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I know how you feel :( This was written great.

Fri, June 26th, 2009 12:23am


Thanks, glad to know you know what I'm going through.

Thu, June 25th, 2009 6:46pm

S.C. Kross

This is a really good poem. ^^ I understand what you're saying...
I'm really sorry I didn't get back to you on the playlist thing, and I'm sorry i'm telling you here. Booksie glitches mainly and i haven't been on for a while. Thanks for adding me to your top ten reads. && I'll be sure to update my notes to let other people know! Thanks for the heads up. BTW, I love your playlist. Great song choices. :)

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 2:12am


Thanks, It was my plesure checking out your page.

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 8:03pm

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