A Broken Little Girl, Fixed

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I wrote this when I was about 14...yeah...

There was nothing for me,

My world was full of hate,

My soul wasn't free,

I almost came to my long awaited fate.


Life wasn't worth living,

I was scared.

Scared of forgiving,

Scared that not a single person cared.


I was an empty shell,

I couldn't love,

I was living in a personal hell,

I couldn't rise above.


But now I care,

Now I feel,

I'm no longer scared,

And for once, life seems real.

Submitted: July 11, 2008

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could i b the first read? Shucks, all those things when u were 14? Lol, great, ill have 2 c what happens 2 me next year xD(13 here) Like ive said so many times...rhyme scheme, im more jealous than my dog right now

Sat, July 12th, 2008 4:23am


haha nice, and thank you, i was just in a very dark period...and i find inspiration in all of the negative things life always tends to throw in my face...:)

Sat, July 12th, 2008 10:28am

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