A Mind in Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Love poem :)

A Mind in Love
My mind fogs as images of your face runs through my head,
There is only you and I, as though everyone else were dead.
The world is ours, ours all for the taking, Just you and I here, the world's problems never again waking.
No more confusion and no more fright, With you by my side, I know in my heart it'll be alright.
Before you graced me with your beautiful presence, my world was dull and bare.
Now I see clearly, as though my dreadful past was never even there.
You are my sunshine, my moon, my stars, my light on a cloudly day.
You give me the courage to go on, you have truly shown me the way.
I know with you here, I will never be scared, you have been there for me when no one else cared.
You are my knight in shining armor, my savior once again.
My past is now once a memory of a life that's never been.


Submitted: July 10, 2008

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pocorox

Great Poem
Its dreamy

Keep writing!

Thu, July 10th, 2008 5:06pm

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Thanks! Oh yeah, question for anyone reading this, how do I add more poems??? I can't figure it out!!!

Fri, July 11th, 2008 10:20am

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Maple Bowen

Love the poem! =)
~Maple

Thu, July 10th, 2008 5:18pm

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Thanks!!!

Fri, July 11th, 2008 10:20am

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Chente

Uhh, someones in love, lucky girl! Again, rhyme schemes, u make me jealous xD. Now im gonna read your book!

Thu, July 10th, 2008 6:15pm

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Thanks! I'm glad you like and, and yes, I am very much in love.

Fri, July 11th, 2008 10:20am

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Catherine

Sweet! It flows really nicely and the rhyming is impeccable. Bravo!! :)

Thu, July 10th, 2008 6:27pm

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Thanks ya! I just wrote this one not too long ago. :)

Fri, July 11th, 2008 10:18am

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Slender Smile/ Husna Tayyab Shaik

Ooh! Very romantic. Its as though u r completely love struck. I love it.:)

Thu, September 25th, 2008 6:51am

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thanks....and i am :) lol!

Thu, September 25th, 2008 1:07pm

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