The Four Seasons Of Missing You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

The Title Is Self-Explanatory .........


Smiling and thinking of you
Recalling everything you do
Like a Butterfly you float in my mind
Like a Rose in my heart you enshrined
Your fond thoughts I wear as plume
Their warmth makes my soul bloom


Burning in your desire
Blazing in your love's fire
Like to the music of crickets lightening bugs dance
I shimmer and sizzle in your romance
Craving for you, I burn
Oh! My Love, Return


Reminiscing of our times together
Memories strangle and smother
Like migrating geese and rustling leaves
I too wish to hibernate and grieve
Distant clouds and orange skies
Colder heart and heavier sighs


Longing for you, am cold and numb
Dismal, dreary and lonesome
Like sitting by a crackling fire on frosty and chilly mornings
Trying to create warm memories out of cold longings
Falling snowflakes on frozen earth
Cold heart and feelings in dearth

Submitted: January 02, 2013

© Copyright 2021 Vikas Sharma . All rights reserved.

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This is beautiful! You are really good a describing :)

Wed, January 2nd, 2013 3:45pm


Thanks for your appreciation of my effort :)

Wed, January 2nd, 2013 10:15am


This is really amazing! I love the rhythm and rhyme! KMU :)

Wed, January 2nd, 2013 4:43pm


Thanks am pleased that you liked my effort :)

Wed, January 2nd, 2013 10:13am

Kathryn Lee Royson

This is really good. We all experience heart break in our lives. Keep writing! :)

Wed, January 2nd, 2013 6:33pm


Thanks Kathryn for your encouraging words ... I tried to depict here that memory of a loved one who is not there with one (heart break or not)... goes through four seasons warm -hot- warm and cold as do our seasons :)

Wed, January 2nd, 2013 10:46am


The message comes through loud and clear. Good writing.

Sat, June 22nd, 2013 4:49pm

Joseph Phoenix

love this poem, fantastic idea as well :)

Tue, August 12th, 2014 1:46pm

Elif Akoral

Love it..especially autumn.

Thu, August 20th, 2015 2:36pm

Melancholic Wisdom

This is beautiful. It's an amazing concept as well. I loved how everything was laced with metaphors, as well as the clear message. Amazing job.

Sat, August 22nd, 2015 9:38pm

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