The other Kayla.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic
(The year is 3013.)Kayla is usually just like a normal girl, except for the fact that she is a agent in the secret organization "Casio." But what happens when her second personality breaks out and takes control of her body?

Submitted: May 18, 2013

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A/N: Hello! Please read this! Okay, so this is the first story-thing I post here... I know that it's kind of short, but I plan to make more chapters.... Well, I wanted to write a little short-story about my character, Kayla. My class is soon having an english exam, so I wanted to write it in english. That's also why I want to post it here: To get responses by people who has english as mother language :P So I want to know: Am I doing any major mistakes? And do you want more of this story? Or should I try to write in another genre? Either way, enjoy!


Do you know what it feels like to have somebody else control your body? psshh, what about not having a body of your own? ....Shut up. “Hah, or else? Please. Just go away. “Sorry, Kayla. As much as I want to get away from you, it's kind of impossible. I don't want you to control me. This is MY body. “Kayla.. You're talking to yourself. I am you. Just with a better point of view. You're a murderer. You can't possibly have a better point of view. You're just crazy. “Am I? You're the one who developed another personality. Im just a fragment of your own mind. No. I'm not like you. “Of course you are! When are you going to realize that I control you because you let me? I don't let you do this. You always force your way out. “If you were stronger, maybe you could hold me in? Hah. Just shut up! “Hahaha! I love seeing you upset. That's always your weakest point. Now. Let me out. No. I won't let you out this time. “That's what you always say right before I get out. I mean it this time. I'm completely calm. “Hmm. I wonder who I should kill this time? No one. I won't let you out. “Antonio has been quite annoying lately... Stop. “You're too easy breaking. Get out of my head! “I can't. You're the one who is letting me talk. I could stop... Please... “But I don't want to”. Stop it... “You're always so dramatic, Kayla. Shut up. “Why don't YOU shut up? I try to say something, but no sound comes out. “Hahahah! I'm already in control? That was fast. You usually put up more of a fight. I'm glad you realize that you can't fight yourself.

She slowly begins to get more control. She lifts my hand and looks at it. She makes my mouth form her words: “No time to waste.” I try to resist as she gets up from the bed I was sitting on. The room seems so small now. She notices the pen on my desk beside my bed, and grabs it. “We need the others to think you're still the one in control,” she says. My suit is glowing red because of her evil aura. When I am in control the suit glowes blue. She raises the pen to the chest plate on the suit and sticks the tip underneath the edge. She breaks it open and puts the cover on the desk. Inside the plate is all the wires that makes the suit glow, and the generator that decides if the suit should glow red or blue. She taps the generator, which makes the suit turn blue for only a second before it turns back. She taps it harder, making it last longer. The harder she taps, the longer it lasts. I use all my force to make her throw away the pen. She looks surprised at my hand, before she turns my lips into a vicious smile. “Stop fighting me, Kayla. We both know you want this as much as I do,” she says. Out of fury I manage to let out a scream: “No!” She quickly lays my hand over my mouth and suffocates my screaming.

After a little while she takes away my hand: “Okay. Seems like I have to use ALL my strength to keep you quiet. Hah. I like those kind of challenges.” She presses her finger ar the generator as hard as she can. Then there is a knock on the door. I hear Antonio's voice from outside: “Kayla? Are you all right? I heard you scream.” She smiles and whispers: ”Perfect.” She picks up the cover and places it where it belongs. Antonio knocks again: “Kayla?” She walks to the door and opens it. She changes her voice a bit to match my happy-voice: “Hey! Sorry, I just thought I saw something behind me in the mirror.” He raises an eyebrow: “Really?” She smiles: “Y-yeah. I'm kind of jumpy today.” “Okay,” he smiles back. “Oh! I want to show you something.” He looks surprised. “Come on!” She takes his hand and starts dragging him along the long corridor of the Casio HQ. When we're at the door Antonio stops: “I don't think we should go outside without telling, Kayla.” She looks at him: “Aw, come on! It's only a few blocks away. We'll be back before anyone notices anyway.” I try as hard as I can to say something, but she won't let me. I can see Antonio thinking for a moment. At last he decides to go with her: “Okay, but we better hurry!” She smiles and opens the door.

She has been dragging Antonio for ten minutes before she gets to a door I've never seen before. She opens it and lets him go in first. I use all my force to try to scream, but she's stronger than me. She closes the door. The room is brightly lit. There is a stair leading to another floor. The stair seems to be rotten. Othervise there is nearly no furniture at all. Only a wooden chair and a table. They seem really old, and makes me wonder how long this bulding has exsisted. Antonio is really confused: “What's so special with this place?” He is facing the other way, examining the room. She smiles and clenches her fist: “you'll see.” She raises her fist and just as Antonio turns around, she knocks him down.


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