Marvelled at Nature!

Poem by: Vincey Delaney

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The true beauty of winter

Before skating, Sister Beth and Sister Mary view the birds, scenery

Bright picturesque winter, the sun is nice, pleasing as can be

Sister Mary now sadly notices a coat hanger, litter and a rusted can

This kind of polluting is crudely senseless, just blame it all on man

"It’s sad that people don’t respect paradise, the joy that nature brings!"

They look around, winter is a lovely princess who delightfully sings

Across the ice, Sister Beth now points to a beaver’s den of great style

She closes her eyes to picture a beaver, he shows a big friendly smile

The daydream makes her laugh, she thinks of a beaver, amazingly smart

In her mind, that coat hanger was perfectly shaped into a stunning heart

Happy Valentine’s Day, February 14, 2010

Hope it’s filled with love, warmth and happiness!

Submitted: January 31, 2010

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Mistress of Word Play

Hi my friend. Really great poem. Loved it especially the end. Happy Heart Day to you, too. Susan :)

Sun, January 31st, 2010 5:14pm

Tonight Alive

This poem is sweet, I like it :)

Mon, February 1st, 2010 7:44am

Eryk Chamberlin

Nice one.

Mon, February 1st, 2010 3:11pm

prateeksha

nice one I like it. check out my poem on nature coming soon

Mon, February 1st, 2010 5:55pm

MidnightQueen12

Very nice poem. :)

Tue, February 2nd, 2010 2:24am

rickyengland

Atmospheric and a vivid picture of the season. Ricky.

Tue, February 2nd, 2010 8:01pm

DreamKeeper

Wonderful!

Tue, February 2nd, 2010 9:11pm

UnderxYourxSpell

A wonderfully enchanting poem! I absolutely love the imagery here: 'They look around, winter is a lovely princess who delightfully sings'. The world is so beautiful during winter; so delicate and quiet. Even as I write this, snowflakes are falling outside my bedroom window, so I can truly understand the beauty of your words and marvel at nature's majesty. Wonderful work =)

Wed, February 3rd, 2010 5:19pm

wolffe

fine

Wed, February 3rd, 2010 6:59pm

Graeme Montrose

loved it, wonderful! Keep it up!

Wed, February 3rd, 2010 10:16pm

Belkis z

this poem was sooo sweet i liked it!

Thu, February 4th, 2010 3:35am

Critica

Interesting poem, I very much liked the end. :) You provided very nice imagery. The only thing I really had a problem with was second stanza " "It’s sad that people don’t respect paradise, the joy that nature brings!" || They look around, winter is a lovely princess who delightfully sings" The second part of it didn't make sense to me, but perhaps that's only me. :) Otherwise very nice poem, well written and a nice idea behind it.

Sun, February 7th, 2010 2:38am