A Sorrowful Song

Poem by: Violet Moon

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This is a poem that I wrote for English the other day in five minutes. I don't know how good it is because we had to make every two lines rhyme. I've never written a rhyming poem before so I hope this is good! Please give me your honest opinion on it! Thanks! :D

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Submitted: October 29, 2009

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A Sorrowful Song

Today you hurt me more

Than ever before.

You broke your own rule

By being so cruel.

You are so unkind

And evil in the mind.

Run while you can

Because I am not a fan.

The pain you have caused me

I will not let you see.

Tonight my dream

Is to hear you scream.

I hope that during the night

You finally see the light.

With your friends you laugh and snicker

And I cry and bicker.

My pain will never fade

Because of the choices you made.

I will dry my tear and stay strong

But forever sing this sorrowful song.


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A Sorrowful Song

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Genre: Poetry

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This is a poem that I wrote for English the other day in five minutes. I don't know how good it is because we had to make every two lines rhyme. I've never written a rhyming poem before so I hope this is good! Please give me your honest opinion on it! Thanks! :D

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