Babe, That's Why I Love You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

I just wrote this very quickly after talking to my amazing and sweet boyfriend. He is always making me smile and is so great. Please let me know what you think of this because it's been awhile since I wrote a poem and I'm kinda out of it so I need any advice or compliments I can get. lol. Thanks guys! :D

Babe, That’s Why I Love You

 

The things you say,

Make me laugh.

Make me cry.

Make me smile.

Make me dance with joy.

 

Your smile and laugh,

Makes my day.

Makes my heart flutter.

Makes me blush.

Makes me realize how lucky I am

to have found you.

 

Your sweet words.

Make me fall in love.

Make my day.

Make the minutes pass by.

Make everything okay.

 

Your strong embrace,

Makes me feel safe.

Makes me feel loved.

Makes me never want to leave your arms.

Makes me happier then ever.

 

The things you do,

Make every day amazing.

Make everything perfect.

Make me the happiest girl alive.

 

Babe, that’s why I love you.


Submitted: May 16, 2010

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bimbobunny

Awwwwwwwwwwww~ Is this for your new boyfriend u loved up thing! *giggle* ?

Oh. P.S. Updated It's Not Me, It's You. Your profile is failing me once again. It's been working so well for the last couple of times too so i really have no idea what happened.

Sun, May 16th, 2010 10:39pm

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Haha, yeah it is! :) He's been so sweet and amazing in the few days we have been amazing. lol. hehe.

Oh! Okay!! Cool! Thanks for letting me know. :) Wow, it really isn't working again? I'll have to try and fix it... AGAIN! Ugh, Oh well. lol. But thanks for letting me know!!! :D

*Violet*

Mon, May 17th, 2010 8:05am

SomeoneCrazy

awww i love it

Tue, May 18th, 2010 8:08am

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Aww, thanks so much!!! :D

*Violet*

Tue, May 18th, 2010 9:17am

Vincey Delaney

oh so warm and beautiful!!! This surely caught my emotions!!! Great piece, a special keepsake!!

Wed, May 19th, 2010 6:01pm

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Aww, thanks so much!!! I'm really glad you think so! I wasn't sure if this was good or not so thanks for saying that!!! Thanks so much for reading/commenting!!! :D

*Violet*

Wed, May 19th, 2010 2:14pm

txangel

now that's really a sweet poem..good job on it hon..

Thu, May 20th, 2010 6:48am

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Aww, thanks so much!!! :D

*Violet*

Sun, May 30th, 2010 1:37am

ladygothicka

Lovely as always. Beautiful writing - here's a comment that didn't make it to your profile page for my novel:

Who knew Nate was gay? Next chapter of OGF is now up, I desperately need comments so please do me the honour! Thank you so much.

Tue, June 8th, 2010 1:00pm

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Aww, thanks so much! I'm so glad u think so!!! :D

Alright, I'll try and check it out as soon as I can. I'm trying to get caught up on my stories as well as everyone else's and I'll get to everything eventually. lol.

Thanks so much for reading/commenting!!! :D

*Violet*

Tue, June 8th, 2010 3:48pm

Luv2RideWriteAndLaugh

Just another great piece! luved it. :)
-Aquamarine Moon

Wed, July 7th, 2010 12:22pm

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Haha! Thanks girly! :D

*Violet*

Wed, July 7th, 2010 9:08am

a9fc8yt3kd

Awww ... That's cute.

Wed, July 27th, 2011 11:01pm

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Thanks!!! :D

*Violet*

Thu, October 27th, 2011 8:32pm

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