hope in darkness.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is what i felt "IN HOPES DEPENDED IS WORLD". so whenever or where ever there is situation of life or death when the hopes uplift you it make you feel good this is what i have tried to do in my poetry.............

just when i realize
there is no more way
my life in darkness
will always stay
when i had lost
every faith in me
wandering in darkness
no way i see
then comes the ray of hope
piercing through the dark
it shows the way around
creating a mark
oh when about to give up
oh when about to go
feeling so hurt
feeling so low
there comes the ray of hope
boosting my hope
it lift me from black hole
like the savior rope
thus my friend
never ever give up
till you die till you failed
never ever stop...................


Submitted: June 28, 2013

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zodwa

"just when I realise, there is no more way......darkness
....then comes the ray of hope piercing through the dark."
So moved, touched and motivated by just that clever simple yet effective choice of vocabulary.Love your work!!!

Sun, August 25th, 2013 3:15pm

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