Dont GO

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Personal Finance  |  House: Booksie Classic

easy , understanding.....poem.... acually song

  Come here, where will you go.....

i need u right here (right here)

 i dont want u to go

 leave  me n gooooo........ dont go....

 come here , let me  touch yuor hand

 let our fingers intervine.....

 i am lost in the sea

 lost in the blue of  yuor eyes....

comehere, where will you go.....

i need u right here (right here)

 IF YOU'RE GONE.... I'LL WONT BE ABLE TO BREATHE......

 SO DONT GO....

I DONT WANT YOU TO GO...

Come here, where will you go.....

i need u right here (right here)

 come here , let me  touch yuor hand

 let our fingers intervine.....

 DONT GOOOO...............(GO)

 


Submitted: April 28, 2010

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Ben Walker

Aw don't let them go!
um i'm not sure if you did this on purpose since it appears twice but just in case heres a typo i found.

" come here , let me touch (yuor) hand"
shouldn't it be your?

Besides that good poem.

Wed, April 28th, 2010 7:56am

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thnx......i ws in a hurry.............
nyway thnx ben..............

Wed, April 28th, 2010 1:04am

shreyas

AWECHUM !!

Thu, June 9th, 2011 2:42pm

shreyas

damn touchy ..

Thu, June 9th, 2011 2:44pm

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uh huh

Mon, August 15th, 2011 3:12am

VJAMRITA

thnx shrey :D

Fri, June 10th, 2011 6:25am

utkarshkohli

Strong,effective,And a good rythm..:)

Mon, July 1st, 2013 6:02pm

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thanx :)

Tue, July 2nd, 2013 12:30am

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