Edohlmir (First of the Scripts of Ariantir)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
"Get out Zora," she whispered hoarsely. "Get out while you still can."

Bound by the dying wish of their mother, Zora and Camiel MacGent must find their own place in the world. So when the famed Lady Silverstone expresses a need for two new servants, the siblings think it is a wish come true.

Five years on, Zora has been missing for three years, and Camiel is forced to flee his homeland, after being arrested in connection with a fabled jewel of legendary powers. Him and a young girl, Lensil, must travel to mainland Ariantír in order to escape the prying eyes of the Queen. Camiel is uneagar to reveal to his companion the real reason he was imprisoned - but Lensil has secrets of her own.

It's a race against time, although Camiel doesn't know it yet. The Queen has spies everywhere, and it won't be long before they find him...

[MOSTLY UNEDITED. FIRST DRAFT ONLY]

Table of Contents

Forenote

Submitted: November 16, 2011

Map of Irilugesia (rough along the edges as it's on two pieces of A4) Zoom in on Rosk and the Iliahn Isles (with route in red) ... Read Chapter

Painful Decisions

Submitted: October 19, 2011

Sidheme is gravely ill. Zora and Camiel have some painful decisions to make... Read Chapter

Gone again

Submitted: November 09, 2011

--- UNEDITED --- Sweat poured profusely off Camiel's back as he dug the fork deep into the dry, cracked soil. He grabbed the bucket t... Read Chapter

The Edohlmir

Submitted: November 10, 2011

--- UNEDITED --- There was a pause. “I’m sorry?” Camiel replied, confused. “The Edohlmir, what do you know about it?... Read Chapter

Lensil

Submitted: November 15, 2011

--- UNEDITED --- Camiel’s days and nights were filled with the annoying plops as drip of water fell from the ceiling, and the antic... Read Chapter

Nothing Revealed

Submitted: November 23, 2011

--- UNEDITED --- “What are you?” Camiel repeated angrily, but he got no further reply from the girl. He cursed, annoyed at her pa... Read Chapter

Suek

Submitted: December 02, 2011

--- UNEDITED --- By the end of the day, Suek was in sight, as Lensil had predicted. Camiel could not fault her for her accuracy. ... Read Chapter

Suek (part 2) The Botanist's Store

Submitted: December 08, 2011

--- UNEDITED --- When he entered the room, Lensil was not there, so Camiel set the fabric down on one of the two beds, before settlin... Read Chapter

Leaving Home

Submitted: January 12, 2012

--- UNEDITED --- The next two days passed quickly, or so it seemed to Camiel, whose days were spent preparing for the coming journey.... Read Chapter

Lost in the Sands of Time

Submitted: March 20, 2012

It half crossed Camiel’s mind to turn back, to ask the captain to stop and turn around, but he restrained himself. He knew he could not... Read Chapter

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