I'm. . .not sure

These years
Wasted
Our love
Blinded

Your life
Hated
My soul
Binded

Warmth
Gone away
Death
Will stay

Those years
Were wasted
Our love
Now ended


Submitted: March 07, 2012

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bongz14

very nice!

Wed, March 7th, 2012 3:44pm

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Thank you

Wed, March 7th, 2012 9:07am

Deathstix

cool

Wed, March 7th, 2012 5:36pm

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Thanks

Wed, March 7th, 2012 9:44am

Sashael

This is really depressing but still kind of pretty. It would be a little better if you used "blinded" only once though.

Wed, March 7th, 2012 6:39pm

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Yeah I was trying to think of other words but I was having a mini writers block

Fri, March 9th, 2012 9:02am

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