For those who understand sadness and hurt. That's probably most of you.

The dust

falls

like black snow

into emptiness

like a pit

like the abyss

the gap

The dust

that sleeps beneath your eyes

The dust

that lurks in the cornersof your heart

The dust

that lives in all your dreams

It falls

It drifts

It's there

It's always there

and you can't escape.


Submitted: October 15, 2008

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Itsuwari

Incredible work, it flowed fluidly and with considerable power. Brilliantly done, keep it up.

Sun, October 19th, 2008 5:23pm

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thanks x

Tue, November 11th, 2008 7:23am

DomXD

ahahaha
you continue to amaze me
brilliant.
i absolutely adore this

xxxx
DOM.bie

Tue, November 18th, 2008 4:55pm

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awe, thanks :)

Wed, November 19th, 2008 8:00am

wanderingbeauty

I like this one the best so far! 17 thumbs up! ^.^

Tue, February 3rd, 2009 3:09am

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Awe thanks. :) 17 thumbs...i like that :)

Mon, February 9th, 2009 1:29am

tyler

I like this. It all flows together. It draws in in also good job.

ty

Wed, February 11th, 2009 6:45pm

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Thanks amuch. :)

Thu, February 12th, 2009 1:33am

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