Ten Demons In A Circle

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The man who confronts, evil spirts , but only to be tortured and laughed at,

Submitted: July 22, 2012

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The story begins with a man, who has died, and is now ready to meet his maker, 
 
Man *awoke* where am i? why can i not see?. momments later the mans, vision comes back, i'm in a room? how strange,  surely i have died, this must be where my soul, has gone, but why, o Lord am i here?, momments , later the man walks and sees a strange black figure, approaching him, which turned out, to be a demon, when the demon approached the man, the demon snared and laughed at the man, man replys, why do you snare at me? what is it that you want? why do you look at me with such disgust? demon says, you are the victium of the fallen, you are but a lost soul, in the soon to come gates of Hell,  Man stares back at the demon, But i am of servent of God, i am faithfull, and wish to serve him for all eterinty, forever by his-side never to leave his place,  * Demon* looks with spite and haterd, you fool, surely how can one believe such a thing Exist, demon starts laughing, why do you wish to believe in such fairytales, surely you can see by now, there is no God, demon *laughs* the other 9 demons came along, to watch the poor soul cry, in misseary, they witness the man, cowaring in fear, and being victiumes by the other  evil spirts, they all look and laugh, at the idea of the man, believing in God, Demons all respond,  * what a fool, even children now, don't believe in God, let alone a stupid adult, the man looks back, * i read of your work, and i do not fear what is to come, you are but evil spirts, trying to damm me along with you, i shall not fall into your trap, i will not listen to your lies, go ahead and keep trying, i won't listen!!, all the spirts, laugh and taught the man, what a fool, you really did believe that nonsence, think about it this way? then why are you here? you have died have you not? man responds, i will not listen anymore nor will i stand here defenceless to your lies, stop telling such horrible mis-truths, The demon walked closer, to the man and looked down at him, such a foolish human, why can you not see, the truth, is to much for you to bare? the man, looks even closer at the demon, i am Christs servent's you have no effect on me, . they violently thrown the human to the ground, the man qivers in fear, why o Lord do you let these evil spirts, taunt me Lord, what have i done to deserve, this i beg of you give me mercy, the evil spirts come to laugh much more then before, and now all 10 formed a circle around the human, no were to go, or escape, all laughing and taunting mocking the human being, the human keeps reaching out to Jesus, yet the Lord, is yet to come, the demons lay there hand of the human and wisper.......
 
 
Please Read This First! 
 
I made this with great haste, and did not bother to put much time and effort, nor to bother fixing it up, or correcting my spelling mistakes, and a-few other things, i just want someones quick opion, should i continue, or did the just suck? let me know please! 

 


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