Love Rain

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Comparing and contrasting love and rain.

your affection is like rain

coming and going

pouring and sprinkling

hideous and beautiful

safe and dangerous

rain can stop

your affection.. has stopped

once in a while

i get little drops

but they never last

long enough to sustain

my heart

which breaks now

in the name of you

when the drought comes

and the doubt comes

what a gray day

it is in my heart

what a bright day

outside this picture window

in my heart it is raining

outside it remains dry

oh how i do love the rain


Submitted: June 19, 2010

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Brii Morris

That was a really, really good comparison. And I luvved how you turned it into a poem. Wonderful. Gorgeous. Lovely. Beautiful. Ummmm... That's all the words I can think of at this point and time.
;D

Sat, June 19th, 2010 6:25pm

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I love it too... Also written about the best friend from 'A Little While' Thank you!

Sat, June 19th, 2010 11:31am

Brii Morris

OH! Amazing!
;D

Sat, June 19th, 2010 6:26pm

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Thank you!! You're so sweet!

Sat, June 19th, 2010 11:31am

Meadow Carpenter

I adore this!
Ive read it like a million time, Lol.
This is really great :)

Wed, August 4th, 2010 5:43am

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Thanks sooooo much! I love this poem, because I love love and I love rain, so I had to compare the two! Thank yoooouuuuu!! :)))

Wed, August 4th, 2010 6:34am

mistery guy

i like this poem i realy do although i am not a very visual person i kinda got a mental picture a sd one but it was there no more rain though its sunny here ?? ?

Fri, October 22nd, 2010 3:46pm

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Aww, I like it too :) One of my favorites :) Ugh, I know... We need rain sooooo bad it's not even funny!

Fri, October 22nd, 2010 8:59am

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