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Taken (VampireGirls challenge.)

Poem by: WerewolfGirl

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A poem for VampireGirl's challenge... I don't think its good but Meggie says it is soooo...

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Submitted: May 05, 2009

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Submitted: May 05, 2009

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Taken
Chasing the hope,
The hope that he took.
 
As he took the hope,
The depression consumed.
My dignity…
Gone.
 
Taken.
He took it all.
 
I now have no hope.
The dignity is nowhere to be found.
Stolen from me.
 
The pain he left…
Leaving a gaping, black hole,
A gaping hole filled with lonely, hopless fear.
 
I still feel you around me,
I still love you.
 
I hurt you,
I made you bleed,
I made you hurt.
Cry…
 
The call comes,
You are gone…
Gone forever.
 
You are still with me,
All around me.
I want to touch you,
Feel you on my fingertips.
 
The fire rising through me,
I don’t want to be alive anymore.
I don’t want to hold on to this feeling…
 
You said you would never leave me,
I belived your lies…
Your horrible lies…
 
I cry,
And grab the blade.
I did it,
The river flows,
A red river.
 
I begin to fade into our secret place,
Where we used to go…
Just us.
 
The light is white,
Beautiful white light…
It consumes me.
 
I see you…
Do you still love me?
Or am I hopeless even in death…
 
The light fades…
Darkness.
 
Still hopeless,
Still no dignity.
Just empty…
Black,
Death.


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Taken (VampireGirls challenge.)

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A poem for VampireGirl's challenge... I don't think its good but Meggie says it is soooo...

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