No more lonliness

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

when you stop searching sometimes......after youve given up love just finds this poem I express my love for my brown-haired boy

That night the stars were brighter than the moon 

So they each wished on one

Blissful eternity ended to soon

With the rising of the sun

One brown haired boy with truth in his eyes

Held that girl close

He was love undisguised

What that blueeyed girl needed the most

Love placed before them naked and true

As they held each other tight

Though fear was not NON existant they knew

they must choose to fight

For though many things can be fought for and some may be wrong

Love is well worth it in the end

fragile when dealt with but fierce and strong

something worthy to defend

So with the sunsets ans this ocean sand

they slowly fall in love

facing there fear of lonliness hand in hand

a true gift from above



Submitted: August 05, 2007

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very nice (smile)

Sat, October 6th, 2007 6:20am

Whit Wall

this poem really hits home. EXCELLENT.

Sun, December 16th, 2007 9:24pm


Whit Wall:

Well written! Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Mon, September 15th, 2008 2:48am

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