Book by: whiteroses
Genre: Literary Fiction
Author Chapter Note
Will Samantha ever feel like she is worth something?
please comment and rate...
Chapter Content - ver.1
Submitted: May 26, 2011
Chapter Content - ver.1
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Brings back the nightmare feelings that went with high school. I remember someone told me,
"After a few years, you'll realize how nothing you're so upset about now will matter in the slightest."
Now that I'm so far out from school, I can see they were right, but at the time, no way. At the time, anything that made me stand out (usually bad), mortified me. So if it's making me think back to that time, it's effective writing. I'm glad you have decided to go ahead with the book, and I look forward to reading more.
I'm sorry for your "bad high school experiences" but i think these experiences make us who we are or help us make out later in life choices :p. I'm glad you liked it mike and hopefully ill continue the story the "right way" for me and do it justice.
She shouldn't be so obsessed with her weight!
Starving rlly doesn't help!
U will continue this, won't u?
I like it! :D
I don't know what KMU is lol!
And the point is that so many girls in the world are obsessed about looking a certain way, whether its weight or lack of curves what ever it is, so many girls out there have low self esteem because they think they have to look a certain way
hopefully the book will be about her overcoming it
Oh. KMU means, Keep me updated.
Could u tell me when u put up the next chapter, hon?
I'm one of the many girls with low self esteem.
LOL!!! makes sense haha keep me updated :P
when i write it ill post it up and I'll let you know
And you shouldn't have low self esteem, big talk coming from someone who suffers from low self esteem as well looool :P
you are a very talented writer and you are super nice and I've only known you for what 3 hrs now...You seem like a really great person to me and you shouldn't let your worst critic (you) keep you down :D
No, she shouldnt worry about her weight! KMU
I FINALLY know what KMU stands for :D
kay, Sam is suffering from low self esteem and it comes in different forms for her its weight issues.
hopefully, all obstacles will be overcome :D
oh and KMU on your novel as well :D :D :D
What is her size anyway? I bet she's not as big as she thinks she is. She's probably not even big at all. Its so sad but so true that girls especially in high school resort to starving themselves or worse just because they think they aren't as pretty as the other girls who may be smaller than them but the truth is if you don't accept yourself then nobody else will. I learned that the hard way! This is really well-written! KMU plz! xD
Awwww thank you very very much
yeah i agree
thing is, the media shows them that they have to look a certain way to be beautiful or to get noticed... Hopefully the story will show how she doesn't need to be a size 2 to be beautiful :D
I like where you are heading with this. Beauty is a thing that many girls strive for but they don't realize that they are beautiful just the way they are! I find it sad that most often, guys hold the key to determining for a girl whether a she is pretty or not. I wish girls would know that just because I guy might not tell them they're pretty, it doesn't mean that they're ugly. Anyways, keep writing, I love it. Again, just be careful of past and present tense. kmu :)
I hope the story turns out okay
I agree girls should find that they are beautiful whether or not some guy says it. and they shouldnt get validation from guys :P
i will hopefully finish the 3rd chapter soon
It think it would be nicer if the chapters were more closely related to each other. Also, it'd be interesting to see the connection of the title and the story. Though you don't have to bring it in the story already, maybe a little hint in the summary?
the chapters are related in due course and so is the novel title and the story though sadly i havent got the time to finish it yet.
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