Lonely Women - Turmoil Takes Control

Reads: 1445  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 6

More Details
Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is my first story/novel on Booksie so I would really appriciate peoples comments/criticisms. I don't like to stick to one genre so can go from torture to love as I always have too many different thoughts and feelings, so it might come across as not fitting together in terms of the theme in later chapters. It's half based on some real life people. It's about 3 women, but mainly a girl who escapes from a corrupt place, and tells the story of each of their lives, all lonely, and how they dip into depression and a world of darkness.

Table of Contents

Lonely Women. Chapter 1:Turmoil takes control

Submitted: March 12, 2007

This is my first story/novel on Booksie so I would really appriciate peoples comments/criticisms. I don't like to stick to one genre so can go from torture to love as I always have too many different thoughts and feelings, so it might come across as not fitting together in terms of the theme in later chapters. It's half based on some real life people. It's about 3 women, but mainly a girl who escapes from a corrupt place, and tells the story of each of their lives, all lonely, and how they dip into depression and a world of darkness. Read Chapter

Escape to Nowhere

Submitted: March 14, 2007

Grace was everything to her, she had nothing worth shit in her life except that baby girl; she was her life, the only thing keeping he... Read Chapter

Fire In The Heart.

Submitted: March 14, 2007

The grasshoppers and crickets were squeaking and clicking, as if talking to the trees, telling them to stop her from escaping. Just at th... Read Chapter

Light VS Dark

Submitted: March 15, 2007

Stopping for a moment's breath, she heard footsteps running, somewhere in the distance; but she had a good feeling. She had to get her ba... Read Chapter

Baby's eyes never Lie

Submitted: April 19, 2007

Next thing she knew, she was standing on the other side of the woods - at the bottom of the drive. The part she had been trying to get to... Read Chapter

Into the Oblivion

Submitted: April 24, 2007

Time stopped. From out of nowhere Donna could see Boras, just standing there, a little way in front of her, leaning against the wall of t... Read Chapter

Recent Comments

avatar

Unknown

avatar

Author
Reply

avatar

Author
Reply

avatar

Author
Reply

avatar

Author
Reply

avatar

Author
Reply

Booksie 2018 Poetry Contest

Booksie Popular Content

Other Content by WhiteWolf

'###'

Poem / Poetry

A Lovely Land

Poem / Religion and Spirituality

Freedom.

Poem / Poetry

Popular Tags