the cold lonely floor

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic


You yell in my face but words never enter my ears

You try to cause pain to a lifeless carcass

With dried up tears from night before

Without a point of life why try to make mine worse

Take a look in the mirror and you will see

The reflection coming back at you

If worse then what faces me

But leave me here on the floor blood dripping from my face

As I wait for the same the next night

It will happen all again

Submitted: March 08, 2010

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Makes a person wonder why ??????????????

Mon, March 8th, 2010 12:11pm


:( your writing is full of emotion and you express it in an amazing way. i love the part about "lifeless carcass", really brings it to life.. if you wish. :)
love it. xox jennny xox

Mon, April 5th, 2010 2:31pm


thanks haha best a 15 year old can write

Fri, July 16th, 2010 9:04pm

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