The Girl (Chapter One)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic
Holly is the next victim of a crime circle because of her very rich father. Ethan, the leader, captures and strips her to show he means business. But when his companions act upon the chance of having a naked captive girl Ethan takes her away with him to Los Angeles. Ethan wants to rape Holly when he finds out he loves her. They don't have much time for love though because Snakes, one of the criminals, captures Holly for himself. Then Ethan may have to make a choice to save Holly as he wonders if their love will ever work

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Fake Audition

Submitted: July 26, 2011

A group of criminals create a fake audition to lure their new target, Holly Diamonds, a million are's daughter. Read Chapter


Submitted: July 26, 2011

Holly learns how cruel these men can be. A special dungeon is made for her and she is stripped by Ethan. Read Chapter

A Whipping Party

Submitted: July 26, 2011

Snakes irresponsibly throws a whipping party for his friends, inviting them to check out his new captive. Ethan is so angry he decides to take her to Los Angelas to keep her away from Snakes and the others. He also sends a ransom for Holly with a picture of her being threatened with a gun. Read Chapter

Drama Attack

Submitted: July 26, 2011

Once Holly has reached her new destination Ethan wants a video for the ransom but Holly does not agree to help him. So he locks her in a freezer with only a blanket and no food. Her father far away is wishing he could help but has no idea how much money he has. Read Chapter


Submitted: July 28, 2011

The only doctor that works for evil says he can't heal Holly and she will die unless she gets better medical attention. Holly's sister comes to help her father and finds out what has happened to his fortune. Ethan fears he is becoming attached to Holly and doesn't know what to do. Read Chapter

A Video Chat

Submitted: August 01, 2011

Sorry, I know it took a while to write this but I didn't know which direction to take this chapter. I had five diffrent versions of this ... Read Chapter

A Close Up

Submitted: August 01, 2011

Holly started struggling again. This was what she had been afraid of. This was the one thing she had been expecting and dreading. He remo... Read Chapter

What's Next

Submitted: August 01, 2011

Holly stared at him suprised. "You had me! Why didn't you.." Ehtan shook his head forcing the knife further, scratching her throat "I don... Read Chapter

A Lovely Kiss of Love

Submitted: August 02, 2011

Holly remained tied up all night. Ethan had pulled the duct tape off her legs but her hands were still chained. All day Ethan did not vis... Read Chapter

Finding and Losing Love

Submitted: August 03, 2011

This couldn't be real. Holly though as she pretended to be asleep. She didn't want Ethan to know she was awake and come down there.. not ... Read Chapter

Mall Day

Submitted: August 03, 2011

In the afternoon, after some shopping, Ethan came back with many random bags. Holly stared at suprise because some seemed to be from make... Read Chapter

The Slithery Snake

Submitted: August 03, 2011

I decided to use paragraphs for this chapter and now on. Also I kind of changed the direction the story is going in because original it w... Read Chapter

The Beach Motel

Submitted: August 05, 2011

Holly stared at the giant, kinda shed looking, building. They had parked the motorboat and Snakes had sweeped her off her feet and taken ... Read Chapter

Ethan's Girl

Submitted: August 07, 2011

I'm writing the rest of the story through Holly's eyes so you can learn more about her as a person. But I will still go back to scenes wi... Read Chapter

Another Video Chat

Submitted: August 11, 2011

Sorrry, I know I took a long while on this one. I was on vacation with the family and had no internet service. But I'm back and on that f... Read Chapter

And How Will You Pay?

Submitted: August 12, 2011

I struggled with all my might. I was in a bag. The bag was strapped to ground. I didn't know why I was trying so hard. If I got out of th... Read Chapter

A Grand Show

Submitted: August 17, 2011

Ethan didn't wait three days. He waited for two and at midnight left. He would have left earlier but there was much packing and planning.... Read Chapter

An End of a Ride

Submitted: August 19, 2011

I think the prevoiuse chapter was a bit too gruesome than I usually write but it was intresting for me. Just wanted to point that out. ... Read Chapter

A Stolen Treasure Returned

Submitted: August 21, 2011

Snakes did not see it coming. He had put Holly in a chest and there was Ethan. With a punch to his face Snakes was down. Ethan grabbed th... Read Chapter

A Happy Ending

Submitted: August 23, 2011

Ok so I found the original version of this chapter I wrote a long time back. This will actually be the last chapter. I deleted the prevoi... Read Chapter