its how i felt when someone close to me died

You left me standing by myself

you told me not to worry for you would be back

I waited for over an hour

You said it would only be a couple of mineutes

I fell asleep thinking you would be back

I got a call very late

they said you have died

leaving me behind

you died and I died aswell

at the funeral I cried

not for you dieing

but for you being all alone when you did


Submitted: May 25, 2007

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poetpond

I'm unsure if the misspellings are intended to be a part of your creativity, but the poem would read better with proper spellings of minutes and dying.

Fri, May 25th, 2007 9:21pm

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they are ment to be like that cause i wrote it when i was really sad and didnt care about the spelling so i wanted to leave it the way it was ment to be written

Tue, May 29th, 2007 11:19am

Awaiting Judgement

The misspellings are fine....if that is how you wrote it, then keep your creativity and feelings....

Another nice piece....you should write more...on the site

Awaiting Judgement

Tue, June 19th, 2007 10:08pm

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