I WANT TO KNOW (the Room)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

a feeling that keeps on bickering to me when I see whom I like the most

When I see you
I'm like a string of fire
Thats bursting afterwards
And every time I see you,
The world stops turning
For the clock couldn't come with me
Yet chances would
Up here with you
---
Then, I've realized
That I'm no waterfall to convince you
I've seen all the rain right in your eyes
There's something inside of you
---
Why won't you tell me what it is?
For my power blazes in the sea
Because of you...
---
And I know,
I'll be nothing I the Earth
Without a glimpse of you
I became a squirrel due to your eyes
---
I was nothing before you crushed the ice;
And I see something in it
But it is different on what you say to me
Why do your eyes say diverse with your lips?
Why wont you open that door?
Why is it locked in that chamber?
And the feelings,
Why wont it come back, why wont it climb back?
Why does it fade away, Why did you walk away?
---
The past that weve left,
Its really fantasy to bring back,
And now, they were all fancy,
Full of baby things, so childish they are
But why wont you bring them back,
Couldnt we last for more, why do we keep closing the door,
If all that we left, are memories that we adore?
---
I want to know,
What occupies that room...?
I want to see them, like a flower that blooms
And they go in each shutter of explosions, boom;
They have rhythm like what my heart has,
They beat as fast as what my hear does,
And thats what they should be,
Yet it wasnt like what I see
Return to dust,
Return to dust
---
But still, Ill hold you like we would last,
Ill risk everything and have trust,
So that the things weve left in the room,
Wont return to dust,
Would come back at last,
Wont return to dust,
Would come back at last;
---
Coz I want to know the room
And occupy it again,
I want to know the room,
And be with you again


Submitted: August 27, 2007

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seesawmae

This si really nice, i like it a lot! Nice emotion!

Sat, March 29th, 2008 1:29am

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thanks

Sat, April 5th, 2008 3:16am

Nixie

Aw, this is my absolute favourite so far, I like the whole metaphor of the room! Very good job! ~ Nixie

Tue, April 15th, 2008 1:42pm

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to admit it, i wrote this in sixth grade... kept it and stood back to it... rewrite it... and yea... its some quite of hassle... thanks for your support... its touching :)

Tue, April 15th, 2008 6:45am

Pratibha

hey, that was a good one...will check other writings soon..

Tue, April 15th, 2008 9:02pm

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whew... that was heartwarming to hear from you :)

Tue, April 15th, 2008 2:16pm

red eye

I like this crap :) so what music are you giving to it?

Sat, April 19th, 2008 9:53am

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uhm, I'm still not sure if I'm putting local,or international, if its with a singer or minus one, if its a rock song, or a little senti, uhm... maybe I'll put piano here, or rock... haven't decided yet...

Sat, April 19th, 2008 10:35pm

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