Poem by: wikhaiinn
Genre: Young Adult
poetry, mystery, ghost, poem, die, baby, unknown, mirror, literature, letter, wikhaiinn, darck, mystery letter
Submitted: March 05, 2008
© Copyright 2016 wikhaiinn. All rights reserved.
its so mysterious !
Ooh..wila! ahehehehe! ganda! anu nsa letter? pabasa nga! ahehehe! =) mysterious nga!hehehe
ang wierd noh ehehe
Eric JHRB Egan
Quite so much, please check out my latests poetries, I wish you well!
hey this poem is really nice, different, and mysterious... yet it remains to be a very nice job ... well done ! it's a masterpiece! I relly liked it so much, it makes me think much, it confuses me, yet it is the only reason why I shoul read it more and more... It's addictive!
hahahaha! GREAT POEM wila! Definitely better!! Prepare your kites for the endless nights- This is my favorite line. Mysterious and confusing, yet addictive. Wonderful read! I voted for it. hahaha ^^
whew... I know I should update it! Thanks !
I love your 5th paragraph i think that one is very discriptional and have great emotion over all great poem. I hope to read more of your writing soon
The one who wears a hood
Thanks a lot . I hope to read more stuff also from you.I'm on a lie low biz here. I'm trying to upgrade my skills, so my works will be here slow. But still, thanks a lot.
wow, this is realy good and mysterious! Keep up the goodness in your poetry!
thanks a lot
Ah, there's so much to take in, it leaves me wondering what this could've been about. That's a good thing, it's very thought provoking! ~ Nixie
uhm... actually... that's what i'm heading for... i mean, i wrote this to exactly leave something to the reader :)
(so u wont forget it ! ^_^ )
a very mysterious poem, i liked it but i would love to know what was behind it.
got tactics huh? I believe this is the real you... from your secret style.
wow, that was really good.
whew,I'm glad you liked it :)
Eep ! *Hugs pillow to death* This creeped me out . . . In a good way ! Sends shivers down my spine ! Very haunting
ahm... well, that's not so creepy but good thing it has an effect to the reader... its just dark and strange...:)
This is really good. Love that you can rhyme. I tend to use stupid words when I try to so I admire people who can do it and make it sound good. Love the shadowyness of it.
But I can't do it everytime... still need a bunch of practice, good thing I've got time to spare... It's never too late, and I think this is the first thing I wrote with a good surprise... and the rhyme may be good but not exactly to fullfill each hue... oh... what am I talking about .... thanks for the comment, I appreciate it... a lot :)
i liked it. though i'm curious how you got the cool background. anyways though, lovely work. very myserious :)
oh the background is from photobucket... that's where I get all the pictures :) and the fonts, I download them ...
Its really good!
thank yo very much :)
For me it's kinda boring.. (Don't take it personally.)nice ryhmes though. But it's deep.
ok anf you're the first to say that XD XD so I won't really take that personally, really I won't... coz I believe that it really depends to the reader, the reader's taste ... yeah so I don't mind... XD you're only the 1st to say that XD XD haha
Not to get anything from saying that though..
I just think that I have read quite a few with that kind of style.. Didn't mean to be the bad guy. (lol)
But I believe you're such a talent..
And thanks for the comments.
Cheers! : )
hmm yes yes thank you for that =P hmm bad guy huh XD its ok its not everyday you go and get hit by a bull lol... was I insulting you? XD thats for kicking my pen... but then... thank you for coming back and putting some ink :)
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