Poem by: Wilbur
pain, woe, hurtful, human failing
Submitted: April 02, 2012
Dark-faced stinging eyes
Scalding first then freezing pain
© Copyright 2016 Wilbur. All rights reserved.
I love this! Nice one!
I think I did the unthinking thing and answered like another commenter! So, thanks again, Harry. Kindest regards, Connie
Nice. Very vivid. :)
Been there, done that. Baaaadd for the digestion. - Thanks.
Best regards, Connie
Wow. You captured that well. I personally do not have that problem, but do know others that do. It's a scary circle that's hard to break.
That's what I've watched in quiet horror! You got it. Thank you for kind words of support. Much appreciated.
My best to you, Connie
Great insight into the darkness one can carry in their soul. Not only that but an excellent haiku.
I have been studying how you write them. They are not as easy to create as they look
That one just blurted its way out. Not to say I ever.... !!!
Thanks, Dibs. Just give it a try. Five syllables, then seven, then five again. Bet if you took your spider homework you could find one lurking that'd be easy to work... Thanks again, Connie
Great haiku with piercing contrast...so enjoyed it. Carol
Thanks, Carol Much appreciated, Connie
PS...Ever try "Tanka?" It's 57577 instead of just 575 and also fun to do. Carol
Ohhhh... Oh, Lord. I'm going to be working at that obsessively now. I think I thank you! Oh what fun... Many thanks, Connie
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