Poem by: Wilbur
sense, nonsense, some sense
Submitted: May 09, 2012
God and Nature
I have faith in you,
Nature said to God,
Just don’t quite believe
While I, God answered,
Believe in you but
As of late? No faith
© Copyright 2016 Wilbur. All rights reserved.
Our physical and the spiritual worlds in conflict: Is there hope for us mere mortals?
It's been a few days and you have been missed, but you come back with small poem that expands the mind beyond belief and restores faith in smart writing
Happy to see you
Thanks so much. I am a bit off my Muse feed. Things are slow in the writing. Except in longer pieces than I think booksie readers read. But I am around, be assured. Warm regards, Connie
Definitely makes some sense...Very creative and thought provoking. Thank goodness that there is writing today that makes one think. Loved it. Carol
Thanks to much. Glad it tickled the mind...it did mine. Warm regards, Connie
Connie, how do you think up such cool topics?
Dunno Mike. I think it amuses my Muse to throw two words at me and see what I can make of 'em.
Thanks, Mike. Many kind regards, Connie
well done Connie, and a good chuckle!
Thanks so much. I'm not sure what Nature's about lately. Mother Earth seems to be - shall we say - annoyed with humanity?
Kindest regards, Connie
Wow! I have often questioned my faith (Judaism). Very brief, to the point and powerful.
that's a hugely nice comment/compliment. Thanks. I'm behind on my reading. Will catch up over the weekend, I hope. Thanks, Steve. Kindest regards, Connie
that was quite profound in its brevity and simplicity...wow
Gob-smacked me when I wrote it. Those two words, nature and God, were in a novel I was reading and as I saw them - well, the rest just came banging up at me. Thanks so much.
Kind regards, Connie
Ha! Keen wit, Connie. Do believe God must have a sense o' humor, nature... not so much.
Thanks again, Whim. Nice to get up and find your comment awaiting me. Many kind regards, Connie
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